Anyone who is great when it comes to English grammar?

Question

Do I have errors on these sentences:

1.. He was still having Goosebumps from what happened earlier.

2.She gets his Cellular phone to make a phone call home

3.Kurt was alone at his table and all of his friends are gone like a shadow.

4.He is panics as he felt vulnerable for the first time

Answer 1

Uh huh.
It'd be like...

1. He still had goosebumps after what happened earlier.
2. She took his cellular phone to make a phone call home.
3. Kurt was alone at the table and all of his friends were gone like shadows. (This sentence doesn't really make sense to me.)
4. He panicked as he felt vulnerable for the first time.

Something like that.

Answer 2

1 sounds correct

2 isn't wrong but sounds odd. I'd probably simplify it to:
"She gets his cell to call home."

3 is wrong. You start talking about the past but end in the present time. Also, since Kurt being alone implies that his friends are gone the "and" does not sound right. I would replace the "and" witha semicolon:
"Kurt was alone at his table; all his friends were gone like a shadow."

4 again you must decide what tim you write in. Also you are mixing up the verb "to panic" with the noun "panic"
It should either be in the present:
"He panics, as he feels vulnerable for the first time."
or in the past:
"He panicked, as he felt vulnerable for the first time."
Also note the use of the comma (,) when using it, the feeling vulnerable part becomes the explanation to why he panics. Without a comma, the feeling viulnerable bit shows when he panics. (the "as" taking the meaning of "because" or "while" respectivly)
You could also change the order of words around though that is just an option and no more right or wrong:
"He panics, as for the first time he feels vulnerable."


Thats my two (euro)cents

Edit: I agree with the above poster that the "like a shadow" part really isnt that great

Answer 3

Here are my edits:

1. He still had goosebumps from what happened earlier.

2.She got his cellular phone to make a phone call home.

3.Kurt was alone at his table because all of his friends had left like shadows. (This really is not a good sentence. Unless there is a reason to leave it in, delete the "like shadows" portion.)

4.He panicked because he felt vulnerable for the first time

Answer 4

1. He still had goosebumps from what happened earlier.
2. grammatically correct, "cellular" shouldn't be capitalized
3. Kurt was alone at this table, and all of his friends were gone like a shadow. -or- Kurt is alone at his table, and all of his friends are gone like a shadow.
4. He panics as he feels vulnerable for the first time.

Answer 5

1.. He was still having Goosebumps from what happened earlier.

change "was" to "is" the G in Goosebumps doesn't need to be capitalized.

2.She gets his Cellular phone to make a phone call home

the C in Cellular doesn't need to be capitalized and you need a . at the end of the sentence, and maybe change "gets" to "got" because the sentence sounds weird the way it is now

3.Kurt was alone at his table and all of his friends are gone like a shadow.

you can't use the word "was" along with "are" in this sentence. Change "was" to "is" OR change "are" to "were"

4.He is panics as he felt vulnerable for the first time

He panicked , feeling vulnerable for the first time.
I get an A+!!!

Answer 6

I'm not an expert but I think I can.

I. He is still having goosebumps from what had happened earlier.

2. She took her....

3. Kurt was alone at his table, and all of his friends had gone away like a shadow.

4. He panicked as he felt vulnerable for the first time.

Answer 7

i ain't an expert but whoa...

1.. He was still having Goosebumps from what happened earlier. +optional+

2.She gets/got his Cellular phone to make a phone call home
(his? she_ her)

3.Kurt was alone at his table and all of his friends xarex---were-- gone like a shadow.

4.He ??is panics??>>can you say is panics? your sentence should be a past sentence>> as he felt vulnerable for the first time

It easy, Very tiresomeless, it's nothing at the all over hard

Answer 8

1. ok
2. She got his cellular phone to make a call home.
3. Kurt was alone at the table and all of his friends were gone as if shadows.
4. He was in a panic as he felt vulnerable for the first time.

Answer 9

1 He still had goosebumps (referring to the past)
2. She got (again referring to the past) or She gets his Cellular phone every time she makes a phone call home.
3 as all his friends had disappeared like shadows.
4 He panicked

Hope this helps

Answer 10

I'm no expert, but I would say:

1. "goosebumps is not capitalized.

2. She "got" or "took" or "borrowed"...
"cellular" is also not capitalized.
The word "phone" is not needed in the phrase ""phone call". It is implied.

3. The phrase "gone like a shadow" does not make sense to me. I don't understand what you are trying to say.

4. How about saying "It panicked him to feel vulnerable for the first time in his life."