As I fade into the shadow, of were i stand seeing millions of faces but do they
really see me. How can I open myself and let myself in.
Who to fault I point my finger at many... but all are pointing at me. how come i am the way i am? Getting lost in myself and lost with I want.
I am invisible, can anyone see me... or do I make in my mind that i am.
I want to be able to speak my mind and be myself. I want to shine and be notice.
Not knowing on how.... i hate this and i want to over-come it.
2007-03-30 16:11:08 · 12 answers · asked by Jamie T 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
pretty good.. i think your basically stating how everyone feels.. but most people dont show how they truly feel to others.. they just keep it bottled up inside... people are too afraid to show others who they are and how they feel becasue they are afraid they will be judged
.. but if everyone feels this way.. then why do we try to hide it so much?
2007-03-30 16:17:12 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
poem ...
I am not quite sure what it means .... maybe it is just trying to produce that sense of the uneasiness of meaning.
Good job, but keep working at it. Make your verses a bit more "tight" your hand is a bit free, use some internal rhyme.
2007-03-30 16:17:05 · answer #2 · answered by poweranni 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's really good!! Very sad too :0( R u o.k.?? Sounds a bit like how I felt before I was diagnosed with bipolar, sorry if I'm off base, I'm just a sensitive person......:0)
Anyway, you've done well!!...................:0)
PEACE & LIGHT 2 U
2007-03-30 16:16:54 · answer #3 · answered by Minx 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it. if this is for real i am happy that u identify what is missing in ur life & plan to deal with it. take ur time, do some soul search and put the peices together.
2007-03-30 16:20:02 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sound like a cry for help, sounds like a person that is suffering from insecurities.
2007-03-30 16:16:58 · answer #5 · answered by Braxton 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i really like it. neat imagery. shadows...and then being invisible...wanting to shine, but of course you cant shine if you're invisible. very moving.
2007-03-30 16:15:53 · answer #6 · answered by radioflyer 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow thats cool and kind of creepy in a amazing way!
2007-03-30 16:16:48 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Jamie, you are saying alot here. Contact me and we can talk about it.
2007-03-30 16:16:36 · answer #8 · answered by diannegoodwin@sbcglobal.net 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Fix your grammar, and only then will I attempt to read it.
2007-03-30 16:14:53 · answer #9 · answered by Nerds Rule! 6 · 0⤊ 2⤋
I have a poem.....
Roses are red, my butt is blue... I tried to fart but took a big poo.......
2007-03-30 16:15:14 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋