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Okay, I cannot do poems, or write very good, but i had to get my emotions out,and i came up with this..is it any good?

Falling in love was hitting that high,
to get away from harsh reality.
Swaying in the winds, flying across the ocean
Bittersweet feelings of love and freedom fill my heart .No aching sorrows to tear it apart just tears of joy, tears of smiles, you held my heart.
Fleeing from the truth, my eyes are blind to your soul,
How could I never see, the man behind your face, for he Is the one I fear.
With eyes of a demon and thoughts of evil,
your lies decet the love you ever hold.
Criminals told the lies of all, but the innocent are the ones who fold down to you.
Love only holds one key, and to find that key, you must flow through the heavens with sorrow and sadness.
For the one who loves you will find you in your dreams, so come down to the warm dry earth, and join me in this pit of dirt. Our sorrow and sadness can find each other, and take this pain away

The clear blue skies can show your eyes a world of dreams, but the one true love will be the only truth behind all fears

the end

and when that day comes you will know it in your dreams, heart, and soul. Never look back, and never hold onto your fears.

Answer 1

It sounds good to me.
Sounds like your love is strong and real and you are appealing to him to step down rather than live in fantasy. He should step down and face reality, join you and together you would overcome sorrow, sadness and pain.
good attempt.

Answer 2

nice poem