You capture my heart
When I just hear you laugh
And though we are young
You're my missing half
When you're playing with children
And showing them love
You make my heart beat
Like your sent from above
You capture my heart
With your captivating beauty
And inspire me to make
Caring for you my duty
When you're walking, you move
With such style and grace
And I could study all day
Every line of your face
I'll search high and low
Until each other we find
But now for today
You exist in my mind
When we are apart
It's you I will miss
And long once again
To taste your sweet kiss
I'll embrace you so close
Each night and each day
But for now I will search
Till I find you .................Someday
I would like to chat on yahoo IM with any girl who likes my poem (or add me to your buddy list)
2007-03-29 03:23:47 · 11 answers · asked by dwsum41@yahoo.com 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
beautiful!
2007-03-29 03:27:51 · answer #1 · answered by ♥ Lady L ♥ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is a very sweet poem. I am too old for you honey, but I am sure you will capture some girls heart someday if you are anything like what you write.
2007-03-29 10:30:23 · answer #2 · answered by Diane G 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Lovely!
2007-03-29 10:28:23 · answer #3 · answered by xxon_23 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Lovely poem, there are a few lines that don't flow as well as the rest, but only a few. and only minor. Lovely.
2007-03-29 10:39:40 · answer #4 · answered by shadow21276 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, and I refuse to supply you with my personal opinion regarding your poem on the grounds that I may incriminate myself:) LOL
2007-03-29 10:29:27 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It gave me chills. But, sorry dear, I am married. But I really like it!
2007-03-29 10:29:28 · answer #6 · answered by teashy 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it!... but dont you think if you say this to a girl he would think that your obsessed with him...
2007-03-29 10:30:51 · answer #7 · answered by You'llNeverKnow 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
NICE N SWEET,WATS UP?
2007-03-29 10:30:18 · answer #8 · answered by heavenlylovin 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its beautiful
2007-03-29 10:31:45 · answer #9 · answered by stupid_cupid0313 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
awwww.
2007-03-29 11:11:32 · answer #10 · answered by Julie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋