Is the grammar right in here?

Question

This is the balcony scene, where there feelings for each other were spoken, ending in a proposal.

Answer 1

English class? then No.

If you were talking and explaining a scene,

"This is the balcony scene"---- is right
"Where their feelings for each other were spoken"- is iffy and vague. Why ?- 3rd party description.
Change it to "where Romeo and Juliet spoke of their feelings for each other"

Last phrase="ending in a proposal- " dangling sentence. Just add some more words to make it a complete sentence.
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If you were just yakking in real life, and there was no English teacher grading your sentences, then its fine. Everybody can get your drift and understand you, really. Lol.

Answer 2

Their feelings for each other were spoken in the balcony scene, which ended in a proposal.

Answer 3

Use the possessive pronoun "their," not there. The word "there" refers to a place, not to people.

Personally, I would write it this way:

This is the balcony scene, where they speak their feelings for each other, and which ends with Romeo proposing to Juliet.

Answer 4

How about this:
This is the balcony scene, in which they spoke their feelings for each other, and which ends with Romeo's proposal to Juliet.

Answer 5

i think so..