Out of Nowhere
There is us.
The nobodies.
The nowheres' peoples, speaking?
We paint ourselves
afresh here.
Under an SUV's tire,
we invent new words to go with that old tune.
We write here.
We right here.
2007-03-28 18:00:48 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Great dreams fill my mind with wonder.
Am I right in all my blunders?
The lights they shine Amber and red
Inside the the van small mummers said
Words of love and days gone bye
This final breath only a sigh.
A story told; A story done.
Across the Styx now travels one.
2007-03-28 18:16:17 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cool!
It is about the plight of modern writers right?
Have you read Margaret Attwood's " Notes towards a poem that can never be written" ?
It addresses a similar issue.The plight of a female writer in Canada.No body actually listens to her...
Here, who are the nobodies? The writers who are destined to follow old conventions and norms?
Who never gets accepted?
Write more...BEST WISHES!
2007-03-29 01:16:31 · answer #2 · answered by Andromeda 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I like everything except for the title. The title somehow... doesn't fit. Everything else I found profound.
2007-03-29 01:03:34 · answer #3 · answered by Debi in LA 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very expressive. I like it. I think that the title fits very well. You have some talent. Keep it up.
2007-03-29 01:08:44 · answer #4 · answered by Squeakers 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
We write here,
words...
that have no real meaning
mindless drivel,
that consumes our time.
Time spent away from the tasks of this world
away
away
away
what was I saying? what were those words?
Right here..write here.
2007-03-29 01:05:50 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
That's really good. The only thing that should change is the title.
2007-03-29 01:05:31 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
wow you're a real good poet. of course if you wrote that. check my blog; full of short stories:
shadowsandsmoke.blogspot.com
2007-03-29 01:04:28 · answer #7 · answered by Moe A 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
aahhggg....sorry the trueth is yack.
2007-03-29 01:04:25 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Almost good.
2007-03-29 01:03:47 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
good poem,but use better words and use good grammar
2007-03-29 01:41:50 · answer #10 · answered by keith c 1 · 0⤊ 2⤋