We are all here for a reason on a particular path
You don't need a curriculum to know that you're apart of the math
Cats think I'm delirious but I'm so damn serious
That's why I expose my soul to the globe; the world
I'm tryna make it better for these little boys and girls
I'm not just another individual
My spirit is a part of this that's why it's spiritual
But I get my hymns from Him
So it's not me it's He that's lyrical
I'm not a miracle, I'm a heaven sent instrument
My rhythmatic regiment navigates melodic notes
For your soul and your mental
That's why I'm instrumental, vibrations is what I'm into
Yeah I need my loot by rent day
But that ain't what gives me the heart of Kunta Kinte
I'm tryna give us us free like Sinke
I can't stop, that's why I'm hot
Determination, dedication, motivation
I'm talking to you of my many inspirations
When I say I can't let you or self down
If I were on the highest cliff, on the highest riff
2007-03-28 15:25:52 · 7 answers · asked by lil_snipe 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
If I were on the highest cliff, on the highest riff
And if you slipped off the side and clinched on to your life
In my grip I would never ever let you down
And when these words are found
Let it be known that God's penmanship has been signed
With a language called love
That's why my breath is felt by the death
And while my words are heard and confined to the ears of the blind
I too dream in color and in rhyme
So I guess I'm one of a kind in a full house
Cuz whenever I open my heart, my soul or my mouth
A touch of god reigns out
2007-03-28 15:26:07 · update #1
Luvly, did you even listen to that? It's a a remix that doesn't have good quality and it's not even the whole song. Here's a better link
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gjgIMkiorh8&mode=related&search=
2007-03-29 06:58:50 · update #2
wow!! that was really good!! the only thing i would say is to change it to darn. you're a really good writer!
2007-03-28 15:32:17 · answer #1 · answered by hpink 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I believe you put great effort into that, it's apparent. Very good. The only thing I would change if it was my own is thinking about doing something unexpected with the format or line meaning. Changing it could revolutionize the whole process altogether, and that's how those types of writings came to be regardless, evolved from other forms.
2007-03-28 22:36:03 · answer #2 · answered by Answerer 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good to see people enjoying something from a rap song so much. Maybe they'll change the way they look at the genre as a whole by reading this one Snipe! ;o)
2007-03-29 10:01:48 · answer #3 · answered by Luvly 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Amatuer drivel written by an illiterate. Don't give up your day job or hold your breath waiting for a publisher.
2007-03-29 00:49:23 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
It's good....it just seems like you tried to hard to get things to rhyme. Like you threw things in there just because they rhymed....
2007-03-28 23:23:01 · answer #5 · answered by NoMoreBabydoll 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love that. very good, my friend. keep writing
2007-03-28 22:34:32 · answer #6 · answered by tamboz 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good work - keep at it :)
2007-03-28 22:33:38 · answer #7 · answered by Bella-El 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋