i have to write an essay and it's due tomarrow!
i only have a few hours, but it's a basic essay.
5 paragraphs. one introduction, three body paragraphs (with suporting details in each), and a conclusion.
the topic is "who do i admire".
ugh i hate these kinds of admire/role model/ who i look up to essays. they're the worst!
i don't know what to write!
please, ideas would be fantastic!
i need to brainstorm and everything!
i know i know
i shouldn't have waited, but i kept putting it off until it's almost due.
ugh i'm so bad at this.
it's my bad! please don't lecture me on this!
please, any help would be GREATLY appreciated!
2007-03-28 14:16:33 · 4 answers · asked by Chic 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
You need to pick somebody first. After that, pick 3 reasons why you admire them. Then, think up 2 examples for each reason that proves how that person has that characteristic or shows why this characteristic makes you admire them. MAKE SURE that you have a thesis statement at the end of your intro, and restate your thesis in your conclusion. DO NOT use "I, me, you, we, us, your, etc., etc" in your paper; it makes it too informal. DO NOT say "I believe..." It's your paper, of course it's what you believe! Don't weaken your arguments by saying what amounts to "This is just what I think, but it might be wrong..."
2007-03-28 14:24:16 · answer #1 · answered by q_bertk57 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well don't you have a role model? In any hobby that you enjoy? Man oh man I've never procrastinated so much. If you really HAVE a person you admire, it would be so easy to blab about their qualities. Just calm down, find your subject, and don't let writer's block get in your way.
2007-03-28 21:21:08 · answer #2 · answered by XxFortuneCookiexX 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this was an essay for the california high school exit exam
i suggest Ghandi, here are quick facts about him
-as a kid he was married at the age of 15
-his father died while Ghandi was having sex with his wife
-Ghandi did not know this and dedicated his life to undoing the bad thing that he did
-he fought relentlessly for India's independence from Britain
-Britain often shot at unarmed protesters
-Ghandi, deeply offended, decidedes only peace will make peace and makes mass peace demonstration to finally help britain get independence
-he died after being shot by a kid he did not like him
-as he was dying, he said do not hurt the child
-he dies
2007-03-28 21:23:07 · answer #3 · answered by teddybears 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That is hard I would write about my grandpa grandma mom dad sister brother or if not the write about a actor or actress how about jim carry or adam sandlar or a singer sorry i cant help any more
Hugs and Kisses hope you get an A
2007-03-28 21:22:26 · answer #4 · answered by So... Kiss Me! 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋