Grammer help?

Question

are these correct sentences if not write them in a correct way.

1. We can deliver the model you originally ordered but the price has changed since January.

2. Yes, we can fill your order as originally stated, the price has changed since January.

3. We can deliver the model you ordered, however, there has been a price increase since January.

4. We can deliver the model you ordered; there has been a price increase since January.

5. We can't, the results being too hard to predict.

6. We can't; the results being too hard to predict.

7. The results, our final tally, will be to hard to predict.

8. Before the final tally, we prefer not to make a decision.

9. The results of our final tally, will be too hard to predict.

10. The committee will be understaffed if they except Jones.

please only answer if you know your stuff

my bad i spelled grammar wrong. dont be a dick

thanks pretty ur a big help.

Answer 1

We can deliver the model you originally ordered, but the price has changed since January.

Yes, we can fill your order as originally stated, but the price has changed since January.

We can deliver the model you ordered. However, there has been a price increase since January.

We can't, beacuse the results are too hard to predict.

The results of our final tally will be too hard to predict.

The committee will be under-staffed if they accept Jones.

Answer 2

We can deliver the model you originally ordered but the price has changed since January.

2. Yes, we can( fulfill )your order as originally stated, ( but ) the price has changed since January.

3. We can deliver the model you ordered, however, there has been a price increase since January.

4. We can deliver the model you ordered ( but )there has been a price increase since January.

5. We can't ( predict ) the results ( are )too hard .

6. We can't; the results ( are ) too hard to predict.

7. The results, our final tally, will be ( too ) hard to predict.

8. We prefer not to make a decision before the final tally,

9. The results of our final tally will be too hard to predict.

10. The committee will be understaffed if they ( dismiss ) Jones.

Answer 3

#1 is wrong.


1. We can deliver the model you originally ordered, but the price has changed since January.

(comma)

#2 could be worded better

2. Although the price has changed since January, we can still fill your order as we originally stated.


3 is nice

4....eh. To me it's just all wrong.


5 is wrong.
We can't, the result's being too hard to predict. (apostrophe)
(I think it would still be better as two sentences)
We can't. The results are too hard to predict.

6 looks wrong to me

7 is ok. It's just an odd way to word it.

8 is fine

9 is wrong. It should be "The results of our final tally will be too hard to predict." (No comma)

10 is wrong.

The committee will be understaffed if they accept Jones.

(you used except rather than accept)

But the sentence still doesn't make sense, because if someone was hired/accepted, they would not be UNDERstaffed. So the word you should use is "Dismissed," "Fired," or "Let Jones go"

Answer 4

The word is 'grammar', not 'grammer'.

I can do all this but I suspect that you are trying to get someone to do your school homework for you. Is this the case?

I don't want to help anyone to cheat but I'm happy to give you some pointers. Firstly you need to read up on semi-colons and commas.

Only put a comma in if you need to separate two clauses. You should be able to remove a clause between two commas and the sentence will still make sense.
eg. The shirt, which is at the laundry, has blue stripes.
would make as much sense as
The shirt has blue stripes.

A semi-colon is stronger than a comma but weaker than a full-stop. The part of the sentence after the semi-colon could be a separate sentence but should amplify the first half of the sentence.

eg. The shirt has blue stripes; it is at the laundry.

Secondly, you need to look at literals, ie. words that are spelled differently and have a different meaning but sounds the same such as they're and there and their. Both the seventh and the tenth sentence have words that have been misused in this way.

I hope this helps.

Answer 5

I refuse to help anyone who misspells grammar. Learn your own English. You can't leech off of yahoo answers in the real world, so I wouldn't make it a habit.

Answer 6

The actual spelling is "grammAr".