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My story is about two girls, Catherine and Adrienne, who have been best friends forever! Adrienne had died a few years before the book begins, and she slowly begins to spiral into depression, but catherine and Ade's bf Brad are there ... in the end she overdoses, but she doesnt die and turns her life around.. any good ideas? email me if you want a exerpt from the story... heres a small one: Ever since Adrienne’s dad died six years ago, her mom has fallen deeper and deeper into depression. She spends most of her time locked in her room. I don’t like going to Adrienne’s house, because it’s so sad. It lingers with death and misery. Sometimes, Ms. Miles will just start sobbing uncontrollably. It echoes all throughout the huge, empty home. Adrienne somehow felt that her mother’s condition was her fault and so her way of getting back was to cut off all of her beautiful, blonde hair, dye it black, and mar her body with piercings and tattoos. But it sort of suits her. She was always the rebel.

2007-03-27 17:06:19 · 11 answers · asked by shanabanana922 2 in Arts & Humanities Books & Authors

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Dont worry so much about the title. Most writers simply use WIP - work in progress until they are ready for titles. For right now, you need a LOT more character analysis and plot. You also need to research drug abuse and depression - big time. Then, you need to do some brainstorming on paper looking for some subplots and plot changes. After that, a good outline. Then you are ready to begin writing. When you do, you will find a title jumps out at you. For now just call it Best Friends WIP - and dont dwell on it. Most writers change titles a couple times along the way anyway. If you lock yourself into one, you will kind of lock yourself into a mood and a theme and right now you arent ready for that. Hold off a while while you do your background work. Pax - C.

2007-03-27 22:10:01 · answer #1 · answered by Persiphone_Hellecat 7 · 1 0

Oh Father, where art thou?
Rebel without a cause
Why death calls so sweetly
Always there
I really think the last one would be good. Her bf and bff have alwasy been there to help her, her fathers memory will always be in her mind espeically becuase of her mothers reactions, and how pain even though we may try to make it go away is always there.
Keep writing girl, your great!
suggestion: possibly write the story from all three main characters point of view. Adrienne (show flashbacks to her father), Catherine (as she begins to see her freind change for what seemed okay at first and then severly worse), and her boyfriend Brad who cares deaply about Adrienne and wants to help her but is unable to know how so he turns towards Catherine for help as well). Catherine could most likely be the main voice, after all she is the one who it seems most people rely on.
There you go gil. Good luck with your writing. May your muse be with you. And remember, the pen is mighter than the sword!
God bless you
K.K.

2007-03-27 18:07:02 · answer #2 · answered by Kurious_Kat 3 · 0 0

The Whispers of Adrienne

2007-03-27 17:11:34 · answer #3 · answered by Travis 2 · 0 0

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2016-09-05 18:33:50 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0 0

Adriaens tears turned the Tide

2007-03-27 17:56:15 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

You could take a specific line from the book, a really significant one, and use that. It always leaves the reader wondering until they reach that line.

2007-03-27 17:11:22 · answer #6 · answered by The Goddess of Demons 2 · 0 0

Your question makes no sense and is self contradictory. Learn to write before you worry about a title.
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2007-03-27 18:45:09 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Keep writing pal.

Jonnie

2007-03-27 17:15:39 · answer #8 · answered by Jonnie 4 · 0 0

I'm not very good at these kinds of things, but you could call it A New Beginning...or not. haha

2007-03-31 13:13:42 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

deep depression or something with deep in it

2007-03-27 17:12:58 · answer #10 · answered by robert c 3 · 0 0

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