Some Guy Spat this freestyle rap. Is it any good?

Question

yo u still young go hang wit ur friends at the mall. no beef but u cant rap, go pick up a basketball.

6 bars, 12 lines, thats how you do the rhymes. jus do wat u do just dont get outta line.

yo u in 8th grade take advantage of that, no drinking, no weed, u gotta stay away from that

i look back at all the things i done seen in the hood
from dead bodys crackhouse, chicken heads, and prostitutes

i made a mistake at 10 thought i was cool, decided to smoke wood. when my mamma found my S hit she spanked me in my glutes

its kinda hard when ****** is throwin beef at chu.
i remember livin 5 days only spendin a dollar

but we have to live this life where we forced to die for our colors.

I think it sucks

Answer 1

seems pretty good to me! probably if i heard it it would sound even better.

keep in mind that i'm a middle-aged white woman though. that probably means my answer doesn't count, huh?? lol... ;)

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