If I could bottle laughter to sell for cash for me
I'd still be a poor man 'cause I'd give it away for free.
If I could bottle happiness (every bit that I could get)
there'd never be a teardrop, no pillow would be wet.
If I could bottle all good things; strong, meek, and mild
I'd wrap them up and give them to each and every child.
(Please be kind to one another, and especially children).
Thank you for reading my poem.
2007-03-27 13:07:08 · 11 answers · asked by Joe 6 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Awww...that's so nice. And it has such a good message. I love it.
2007-03-27 13:14:32 · answer #1 · answered by I am soooo splendiferous 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Why would you say that you would sell it for cash and then say give it all away for free,i mean which is it.Overall i liked it,let me know if you need to talk about anything
2007-03-27 20:14:26 · answer #2 · answered by mybeou04 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think your poem is excellant. It made a tough day a little
brighter.
2007-03-27 20:17:24 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it very much! Good Job!
2007-03-27 20:11:29 · answer #4 · answered by ann m 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Vogon poetry is mild by comparison.
2007-03-27 20:10:21 · answer #5 · answered by Andrew 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
if i could bottle all the mediocre poetry and toss it into the sea
all the P&S people would frakking LOVE ME!
2007-03-27 20:14:44 · answer #6 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 2⤋
That made me happy! *smile*
2007-03-27 20:10:31 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
very touching... here's a star:)
2007-03-27 20:11:17 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
sounds good!!
2007-03-27 20:10:44 · answer #9 · answered by Mike 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It is not bad.
2007-03-27 20:18:01 · answer #10 · answered by runescape sucks 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋