Help me to correct my grammar errors.?

Question

1. I feel sorry for her because of her difficult job and not healthy.

2. By the time I woke up, I slept nine hours.

3. Since I last saw him, he didn't call me.

4. My nephew likes cars. So I bought him a model car for his tenth birthday.

5. I have so old dictionary that a lot of definitions in it are out of date.

6. Such few students signed up that the class was canceled.

7. Both my grandmather and my grandfather weren't born here.

Answer 1

I will do the best I can, and try to interpret what you mean and rephrase it so it means the same thing.

1. I feel sorry for her because of her difficult job and her not being healthy.

2. By the time I woke up, I had slept nine hours.

3. Since I last saw him, he hasn't called me.

4. My nephew likes cars, so I bought him a model car for his tenth birthday.
Note: Commas (or semicolons, in some cases) always go before a conjunction when the conjunction separates two clauses (two complete thoughts.) "So" is a conjunction...think FANBOYS, which stands for: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so.

5. I have so old a dictionary that a lot of definitions in it are out-of-date.


6. So few students signed up that the class was canceled.

7. Neither my grandmother nor my grandfather were born here.
Note: Neither always goes with nor and either always goes with or. It's just like how both always goes with and.

I hope this has helped you. :)

Answer 2

1. I feel sorry for her because of her difficult job and poor health.
2. I had slept nine hours by the time I woke up.
3. He didn't call me the last time I saw him.
4. I brought my nephew a model car for his tenth birthday because he likes cars.
5. I have a very old dictionary that has a lot of definitions that is out of date.
6. Only few students signed up that the class was canceled.
7. Neither my grandmother or grandfather were born here.
There are many ways. This is just what I thought up with.
:)

Answer 3

1) I feel sorry for her because of her difficult job and BAD health.
2) By the time I woke up, I had slept nine hours.
3) He hasn't called me since I last saw him.
4)My nephew likes cars, so I bought him a model car for his tenth birthday.
5) My dictionary is so old that a lot of the definitions are out-dated.
6)So few students signed up that the class was canceled.
7)Neither my grandmother nor my grandfather were born here.

Answer 4

1. Because of her difficult, unhealthy job, I feel sorry for her.
2. By the time I had woken, I had slept nine hours.
3. He hadn't called me since the last I had seen him.
4. My nephew likes cars, so I bought him a model car for his tenth birthday.
5. My dictionary is so old that a lot of definitions are out of date.
6. So few students signed up that the class was cancelled.
7. Neither my grandmother nor grandfather were born here.

Answer 5

1. I feel sorry for her because of her difficult job and her POOR HEALTH.
2. When I woke up, I realized I had slept nine hours.
3. He hasn't called me since I last saw him.
4. correct.
5. I have SUCH AN old dictionary that a lot of definitions in it are our of date.
6. correct.
7. (The negative "weren't" makes the sentence confusing) Neither my grandmother or grandfather were born here.

Answer 6

No grammar errors. Those are perfect. Welcome to the US. Your grammar passes for that of a native.