I have to say that there are so many love poems written by wonderful poets that you could just read her a few;
Shall I compare thee to a summers day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate;
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And Summer's lease hath too short a date;
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines
And often is him gold complexion dimmed;
And every fair from fair sometimes declines,
By chance or nature's changing course untrimmed,
But thy eternal summer shall not fade,
Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st (own);
Nor shall death brag thou wonder'st in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou grow'st:
So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see'
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
William Shakespeare
2007-03-27 17:41:12
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answered by Duncan w ™ ® 7
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If you aren't an experienced poet, you may feel that rhyming is more "poetry-like", but your rhyming poetry will also (most likely) sound corny and crappy.
just my opinion, but so much amateur poetry is cliche and unoriginal.
just write from your heart man! go for it! just write down whatever you feel and whatever she likes. Ramble it alll down onto paper/the computer until you are empty and see if you feel a rhyme or just a rhythm! you can edit it later into a poetic form.
2007-03-29 11:18:23
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answered by toxicPoison 4
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The well Lord's reply to the girl's prayer: - Received you prayer… Before you lay your self all the way down to sleep, Woman you deserve a person that's a creep, One who is unsightly, dumb and low cost, One who is c#ck's skinny and susceptible One who cribs earlier than he speaks, When guarantees to name, he is taking weeks. Who prays that you're gainfully hired, And while he spend your coins, beats you if pissed off. Kicks out your chair and slams your door, Whips your again until you begs for extra. Oh Yes! I have despatched a person who will f#ck your brain, Who say tremendous, whilst you ask 'How huge's my at the back of?' One who'll make you yank his wee until it’s a twitchin, In the corridor, the john, the lawn and kitchen! He will call for that you are going to love him no finish, And under no circumstances makes an attempt to shag his exceptional pal. And as you kneel and pray via your mattress, You’ll be happy with the wanker I despatched to you rather.
2016-09-05 18:05:50
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answered by ? 4
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i think that you should make a list or a few phrases of how you feel of her, then how you would describe her, and you may find that they rhyme or not. When you start writing about something you really care about, it will just come naturally and you may rhyme or not. either way its ok. just dont make it cheezy lol
2007-03-27 11:33:25
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answered by cosmo_girl! 3
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well if she doesn't know a lot about not rhyming poems like haiku's or tankas you should probably rhyme it but if she knows about them personally i think you should write a haiku!!!!u sound really sweet to be doing this for your girlfriend!!!good luck!
2007-03-27 11:31:52
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answered by why does this world suck? 1
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love needs expression for growth.
whether it is in the shapes of Poems or words or letters, or pictures or drawings or gestures or signs or symbols or otherwise.
So go ahead with your own choice and ability rather.
2007-03-29 03:16:19
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answered by vidyadhar mittal 2
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It doesn't have to.
Just speak your true heart and she'll know.
2007-03-27 11:24:24
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answered by Ands 7
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