I'm writing an essay about when I took photography lessons, and I'm not sure about how I should start it. I'm never really good at making an interesting and appealing first sentence.
Information: the essay is about me going to get photography lessons. It was early in the morning, kind of cold out side, it was in Auburn, I was nervous.
Any and all suggestions are appreciated greatly!
2007-03-27 09:11:26 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Also, we're suppose to use "sensory words" which give extra emotion and detail.
2007-03-27 09:11:56 · update #1
I woke up to a cold and blustery morning anticipating my first lesson in photography with both excitement and trepidation flowing through my veins.
2007-03-27 09:20:25 · answer #1 · answered by Stefka 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i always had problems with startign essays.
i started a little trick. take the opposite of what i am doing and relate it to the i am doing.
so i would start the essay.
When one thinks of taking pictures, they think of people smiling on a sunny day. Well that is not always the case. How about a chilly day in Auburn in the early morning. It was time for my first photography lesson and personally I was nervous.
2007-03-27 09:25:10 · answer #2 · answered by Justin Sanchez 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
When I lived in Auburn,??(NY) it was a cold, dark morning and I had to walk to my photography lesson. I was very nervous as I could hear the wind blow different object I could not identify all of them. I was so pleased when I reached the door of the house I had walked to.( Something like that)
2007-03-27 09:18:58 · answer #3 · answered by ruth4526 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-04-22 22:49:45 · answer #4 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is a early cold morning in Auburn today and I am so nervous for my first photo lesson.
just give lots of details of what you felt!!
2007-03-27 09:20:38 · answer #5 · answered by heythere 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"Click!"
Describe your favorite picture and what it was of.
Then flash back to your anticipation of the first lesson and tell the story of how you got the point where you were taking that good one.
2007-03-27 09:17:58 · answer #6 · answered by John's Secret Identity™ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋