Any errors in my English?
I want to know If I'm improved:
1.I need to unleash the burning anger I have within
2.A familiar girl gets in the stage to give some sort of awards.
3.The smell of burnt flesh and hair produces an odor that gives pain to their nostrils.
4.The oil melted from his fat is oozing on the floor together with some squirts of blood.
5.His face is unrecognizable after all the burns he had. Mario just left him as he was waiting for his death.
2007-03-27
00:19:30
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