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1) Le Flor is the first and only company in the world that has developed its own water purifier membrane filter, primarily requiring complicated and delicate maintenance at level of constant temperature and humidity, to function on automatic, designated-to-perform manufacturing-procedure system which produce perfectly composed membrane filter at continual pace of every 33 seconds with less than 0.8% in its defect rate.

2) Le Flor’s quality in manufactured goods and expert in producing techniques had been highly well reputed throughout the global market by acquiring NSF Certificate in 2003 and other international recognizing certifications.

3) Le Flor is in the life of people who care for their health and wellness.

4) Le Flor is with people who care for nature.

5) Le Flor constantly stands on the top rank in field of Eco-friendly Electronic Home Appliances.

6) Universally widespread Mega-trend - ‘health & wellness.

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Answer 1

A) The innovative LF developed the first water purifier membrane filter. It's manufacturing techniques are precise and exacting; the end result is only a 0,8% defect rate. During this automated process, constant, delicate monitoring of temperature and humidity is vital and is a significant factor in the defect rate of only 0.8%. Every 33 seconds, a perfect membrane rolls off the assembly line.

B) The global market has recognized the superior quality of LF's product. In fact, a professional organization awarded the much sought after and respected NSF Certificate in 2003.

C) and D) People who place value on health and wellness are faithful customers of LF, as are those concerned with preserving nature.

D)Nationally recognized eco-friendly organizations consistently give LF's electric home appliances high marks.

E) With the widespread emphasis on wellness and preventative health, LF stands as pillar.

Answer 2

) Le Flor is the first and only company in the world that has developed its own "water purifing membrane filter ", primarily requiring complicated, but delicate maintenance at level of constant temperature and humidity Designed to function on automatic, it features a manufacturing-procedure system which produces a perfectly- composed membrane filter at continual pace of every 33 seconds with less than 0.8% in its defect rate.

2) Le Flor’s quality in manufactured goods and expertise in production techniques have been highly reputed throughout the global market by acquiring NSF Certificate in 2003 and other international recognizing certifications.

3) Le Flor is in the lives of people who care about their health and wellness.

4) Le Flor is......" People who care for nature".

5) Le Flor constantly ranks " tops " in the field of Eco-friendly Electronic Home Appliances.

6) Universally widespread, Le Flor's mega-trend is "health & wellness"

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