The first major flaw is using a real celebrity's name.
The second is the girl is in 6th grade - no parent in their right mind would let their daughter date or sign up for a "win a date" contest at that age nor would any contest officials allow a child that young to enter the contest.
You're asking readers to suspend way too much disbelief.
2007-03-26 15:58:03
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answered by §Sally§ 5
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answered by Anonymous
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I think its very cliche and has been done a million times by romance novelists since the beginning of Harlequin Romances. I also think that the idea of using a 6th grader is ludacrous. You would have to put an awful lot into the plot and characterizations to have this be different from the millions of other books like this - I also think the romance novel industry is pretty tough to break into and your chances would be slim with a plot like this. Just being honest. Pax - C.
2007-03-26 15:36:05
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answered by Persiphone_Hellecat 7
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I think it would be a good idea if the main character would be a boy and instead of Mr. Radcliffe there would be a young actress called Destiny. Clever, and not overly pretentious. Of course it shouldn't really matter what I think, but I liked the "A Date With Destiny" title so much I just couldn't pass posting a reply.
2007-03-26 15:15:04
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answered by Anonymous
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No. It'll turn out to be one of those stupid, fake, trashy, chick books. The plot line is horrible too--you can't base an entire story on a mediocre [if you can call him this:]actor/[celebrity.
But hey, if it's for your own amusement and fantasies, go ahead.
2007-03-26 15:00:10
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answered by Anonymous
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Sounds a lot like "Win A Date with Tad Hamilton" to me.
2007-03-26 14:57:18
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answered by Anonymous
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Why not? Harlequin might consider publishing it.
You would have to change the celebrity's name to a fictional one, though, unless you get permission to use it.
2007-03-26 15:12:08
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answered by Anonymous
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Yea, it sounds like a good idea!
2007-03-26 14:56:12
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answered by Micki James FAN!!!4/EVER 1
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yeah its good! me, i wanna become a writer so i should know its good! i have been studying all about how 2 write a good book and its good just that make sure that u include many details ok?
2007-03-26 14:59:20
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answered by What up!! 2
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good idea, but i would make sure that you use different names than in real life.
2007-03-26 15:05:38
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answered by Alysse 2
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