writing problems...for narrative.?

Question

I need some correction if I have any, for my narrative commercial script assignment.

Any help is appreciated.


1. Universally widespread Mega-trend - ‘Well-being.’

(by 'well-being' I wanted to say a word that describes the trend that people are into these days for their healthy body by doing yoga and eating the organic food and organic cosmetics and etc)

2. Junio persistently stands on the top rank in field of ‘Well-being’ Electronic Home Appliances.

3. The company that values our environment and the future; Junio is distinctive and different.

4. There are over 200 researchers who are devoted to develop technical principles at Environmental technology institute of Le Junio for 24 hours a day and 7 days a week.




For narrative writing..

I meant, those these sentences make sence?

Answer 1

I made a few gramatical corrections.

1. Universally widespread Mega-trend - ‘Well-being.’

(By 'well-being' I wanted to say a word that describes the trends that people are into these days for their healthy body by doing yoga and eating the organic food and organic cosmetics and etc.)

2. Junio persistently stands on the top rank in field of ‘Well-being’ Electronic Home Appliances.

3. The company that values our environment and the future; Junio is distinctive and different.

4. There are more than 200 researchers who are devoted to develop technical principles at Environmental technology institutes of Le Junio for 24 hours a day and seven days a week.

Answer 2

1> fitness craze, health conscious, Eco-conscious

2> consistently, not persistently

3> Junio's commitment to the environment is a cornerstone of our philosophy

4> Our dedicated staff is on hand 24/7 for the reasearch and development of new cosumer and eco-friendly products.

Answer 3

I don't understand? Do you want us to check your facts?

Answer 4

What are you asking us to do for you?