well this is what i wrote ....
Cresent Envy-
Imposter of night
Longing to be something else
dissolves in quick sand
yes or no? and what poetic devices are found in it? what do you think its about?
2007-03-26 13:38:54 · 5 answers · asked by music&drama 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Mythology & Folklore
aww... is it that unclear? well ill give you guys a hint.. its about the giant sphere that takes from the sun.. get it?
2007-03-26 13:52:23 · update #1
Yes, it is a haiku. It is about the moon. Very nice...I like the language. At first I didn't realize that "Crescent Envy" was the title. Yes, you did a good job with it. I love the title.
2007-03-27 03:10:40 · answer #1 · answered by dragonslayernd 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the traditional scheme of haiku is three lines written with the first line has 5 syllables, the second line 7 and the third line 5. is "cresent envy" the title? perhaps i am old school, but i don't see it fitting the criteria if it is not the title. is it about the moon? i am sorry. i don't know.
2007-03-26 21:12:56 · answer #2 · answered by Phoebe24 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a haiku has a 5-5-7-5 rhythm, ur 1st line only has 4.....
2007-03-26 21:09:08 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
phoebe24 has the basics down tight. However, when uesed in English you also must set up rhythm and accent.
2007-03-26 22:02:23 · answer #4 · answered by Terry 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes this is a haiku, and i couldnt fathom what its about.
whats i about?
2007-03-26 20:49:48 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋