Sick & Tired....
I'm falling apart,
I'm standing strong,
I've had enough,
Yet I want to live...
Look at life,
So miserable,
So unfair,
It's ripping me apart...
It feels like life has,
erased me completely
from existance
Car crashes and bomb drops,
Rapes and murders every day,
I think I've had enough...
I'm falling apart,
I'm standing strong,
I've had enough,
Yet I want to live...
Look at life,
So miserable,
Endless torment,
It's ripping me apart...
It feels like life has,
lied to me about who i
am and who I'll be
Feels like my heart has been,
Torn apart so wide,
That It can't be stitched back...
I am...
Sick & Tired...
I am...
Sick & Tired...
Sick...
Tired...
Sick...
Tired...
2007-03-26 08:44:44 · 10 answers · asked by Asho 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
I like it =)
if you don't mind me saying, it reminded me of Evanescence when I first read it. I'm not sure if that's what you want to hear, but there you go. Hopefully you get the right instrumental parts to go with it too.
2007-03-26 08:50:41 · answer #1 · answered by Banana Hero [sic] 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love that song! And I haven't even heard it yet! You better get some instruments and a couple friends and start a band (if you aren't already in one.) And you better make a CD and have that song on it! The lyrics are so deeply emotional and touching, very special and written from the heart. It expresses how you truly feel about things, and that's exactly what makes a song! I'd love to see some of your other lyrics! Great lyricist in the works, keep writing! : )
2007-03-26 15:58:03 · answer #2 · answered by twixette 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like it! Sounds professional. Do you have a tune? If there is any way to put the finished song online, you should, I'd really like to hear it. Also, I hope that this song is not about your life, because it sounds like someone has got some real problems. Good luck!
2007-03-26 15:51:12 · answer #3 · answered by *City Gal* 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The lyrics are okay, but the melody sucks.
Also...
"Rapes and murders every day,
I think I've had enough..."
You should think about moving to a new neighborhood.
2007-03-26 15:48:46 · answer #4 · answered by hookem_hornz 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
your song seems really emotionally charged, but since you are asking, honestly, It is a bit too depressing...(I can clearly see the spoon heating up and feel the rubber armband getting tighter)......
2007-03-26 15:52:26 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like it. I think it expresses how you feel. That's what I do anyway. I write songs for how I feel.
2007-03-26 15:49:21 · answer #6 · answered by Beautiful Blond 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sad song.. Can feel it deep in my heart.
2007-03-26 15:51:42 · answer #7 · answered by AngerINC 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it and I am not just saying that to get extra points!!!
2007-03-26 15:52:32 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
a miserable, but yet "touching to heart" poem. :)
2007-03-26 15:49:44 · answer #9 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it, its kool
its a song that rams kool
2007-03-26 16:09:08 · answer #10 · answered by \♥/ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋