Crawling along the dark narrow road,
Turning to look slightly over my shoulder,
Slightly alarmed 'til I sight a tiny green toad,
Shivering when I notice its gotten much colder,
I crawl and I creep still no cover for me,
I am commonly know as a wrong doer,
I am not what you think I might be,
I crawl on four legs and live in a sewer.
By me! :]
Also guess the animal (my family didn't get it right >_
2007-03-26 08:04:12 · 10 answers · asked by Dee 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
It is a rat. Thanks I have to do it for my school project, glad you like it!
2007-03-26 08:16:11 · update #1
Its interesting....I LOVE interesting! lol
Great, and thought provoking...
I would have never guessed a rat! lol but I see it now!
2007-03-26 08:59:42 · answer #1 · answered by Clark kent 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
HI
A newt or salmander? It is an excellent poem riddle, will check back for your comment to see if you told what it is. A serpent is a know as a wrong doer. A rat lives in a sewer some say crocodiles live in sewers.
LAmmy
2007-03-26 08:08:42 · answer #2 · answered by Clammy S 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-19 23:39:27 · answer #3 · answered by fanelle 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it it's very interesting, and really gets you thinking that's what every good poem should have. It's very clever, but I'm stumped on what animal it may be is it a lizard, a toad, or a bug? (just guessing.)
2007-03-26 08:10:15 · answer #4 · answered by Patricia B 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sewer Rat?
2007-03-26 08:12:50 · answer #5 · answered by chase.casey 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ummm are you...a mouse? Ya got me! I dont know, but I really liked your poem. It made me ponder a little bit, and you painted a picture in my mind of the "mouses" surroundings!!
2007-03-26 08:11:21 · answer #6 · answered by HappyGirl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful!!
Oh, and I love the Ninja Turtles too!
2007-03-26 08:10:38 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
a rat?
your poem is pretty good--just edit it and it will be good to go!
2007-03-26 08:07:46 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
well thats thoughtful
way to go buddy
is that a cockroach
2007-03-26 08:06:51 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's kind of weird. sorry
2007-03-26 08:20:49 · answer #10 · answered by nikki 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋