Justice is the obligation to treat individuals equally regardless of their race, sex, marital status, medical diagnosis, social standing, economic level or religious belief (Kearney 2005). This concept can be taken further to the staff management level which the employers should crate equal opportunities for the members of staff and allocate resources to provide them with the necessary training. This includes providing newly qualified nurses with the preceptorship programme.
2007-03-26 07:35:45 · 7 answers · asked by flanagan_margaret 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Higher Education (University +)
I don't think justice quite fits that definition, it sounds more like equality.
2007-03-26 07:40:17 · answer #1 · answered by Mahsa H 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
SOUNDS GOOD JUST A FEW GRAMMATICAL CORRECTIONS, TRY THIS:
Justice is the obligation to treat individuals equally regardless of their race, sex, marital status, medical diagnosis, social standing, economic level or religious belief (Kearney 2005). This concept can be taken further to the staff management level IN which the employers should CREATE equal opportunities for the members of staff and allocate resources to provide them with the necessary training. This includes providing newly qualified nurses with the preceptorship PROGRAM.
THE LAST CORRECTION DEPENDS ON IF YOU LIVE IN THE U.S., IF NOT PAY NO MIND TO IT.
2007-03-26 07:52:45 · answer #2 · answered by Marray 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Justice is the obligation to treat individuals equally regardless of their race, sex, marital status, medical diagnosis, social standing, economic level or religious belief (Kearney 2005). This concept can be taken further to the staff management level where the employers should create equal opportunities for the members of staff and allocate resources to provide them with the necessary training. This includes providing newly qualified nurses with the preceptorship programme.
only 2 small changes
2007-03-26 07:46:16 · answer #3 · answered by sabrina 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Change the middle sentence to: At the staff management level this concept means that employers should create equal opportunities for all members of staff and allocate resources to provide them with the necessary training.
2007-03-26 07:40:58 · answer #4 · answered by CanProf 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
SENSE
If the first sentence is a direct quote, then put it into inverted commas "...." There should also be a comma after equally on the first line.
Resources should be allocated to an Equal Opportunities training budget to ensure that all personnel are conversant with their responsibilities and legislation
2007-03-26 08:03:42 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Justice is not the right word. it sounds more like equality or fairness
2007-03-26 07:51:27 · answer #6 · answered by Bettee62 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Full stop after "level". Remove the word "Which". Comma after "Staff".
2007-03-26 07:58:52 · answer #7 · answered by busta 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋