Hi am am a German guy I made this for English is it okay? please correct it if it need it?

Question

Handout "Alaska"

In the year 1867, the United States bought Alaska
from Russia for about 7.2 million US Dollar.
On January 3rd, 1959, Alaska became the 48th
state of the United States of America.
The main cities in Alaska are Juneau, Anchorage
and Fairbanks. The kapital city is Juneau.
Alaska is a very large state, about 4 times bigger
than Germany and it is the largest state in the
United States.
Only about half a million people live there, that
means there are only 0.4 people per square kilometer
In Gernamy, there about 280 people per square kilometer.
That ist 700 hundred times more as in Alaska.
Alaska has a beautiful countryside, there are a lot mountains, the biggest is McKinley 6194m higth.
In Alaska are very nice seas, you can go fishing there very well.The biggest seas are Bencharof, Iliamna, Nakmet an Ugashilk.Alaska is very famous too because of the gold-rush
at the end of the 19 th centery and because of its important oil fields in the Prudhoe

This is for English class I wrote this please check the grammar, thanks

Answer 1

In the year 1867, the United States bought Alaska
from Russia for about 7.2 million US Dollar(s).
On January 3rd, 1959, Alaska became the 48th
state of the United States of America.
The main cities in Alaska are Juneau, Anchorage
and Fairbanks. The (c)apital city is Juneau.
Alaska is a very large state, (and is) about 4 times bigger
than Germany and it is the largest state in the
United States.
Only about half a million people live there, (which) means (that) there are only 0.4 people per square kilometer(.)
In Gernamy, there (are) about 280 people per square kilometer(,) that is 700 hundred times more (than) in Alaska.
Alaska has a beautiful countryside, there are a lot (of)mountains, (but) the biggest is McKinley(, which is) 6194m (high).
Alaska (has a very nice sea and you may even go fishing there if you wish). (Alaska's) biggest seas are Bencharof, Iliamna, Nakmet an Ugashilk. Alaska is (also) very famous because of (it's) gold-rush, at the end of the 19 th centery and because of its important oil fields in the Prudhoe.

Every thing in () is what i added. I am only in high school, so i may be wrong, but it looks good

Answer 2

In the year 1867, the United States bought Alaska
from Russia for about 7.2 million US Dollars.
On January 3rd, 1959, Alaska became the 48th
state of the United States of America.
The main cities in Alaska are Juneau, Anchorage
and Fairbanks. The capital city is Juneau.
Alaska is a very large state, about 4 times bigger
than Germany and it is the largest state in the
United States.
Only about half a million people live there, that
means there are only 0.4 people per square kilometer
In Gernamy, there about 280 people per square kilometer.
That is 700 hundred times more as in Alaska.
Alaska has a beautiful countryside, there are a lot mountains, the biggest is McKinley 6194m high.
In Alaska are very nice seas; the fishing there is good.The biggest seas are Bencharof, Iliamna, Nakmet an Ugashilk.Alaska is very famous too because of the gold-rush
at the end of the 19 th centery and because of its important oil fields in the Prudhoe.


Hope this helps :)

Answer 3

The United States bought Alaska from Russia for about $7.2 million US dollars in 1867. On January 3, 1959 Alaska became the 48th state of the US.

The main cities in Alaska are Juneau, Anchorage
and Fairbanks. The capital city is Juneau. Alaska is a about 4 times larger than Germany and is the largest state in the United States. Approxiamtely half of a million people live there, which means there are only 0.4 people per square kilometer, in contrast there are about 280 people per square kilometer in Germany. This is 700 hundred times more people per square kilometer than there are in Alaska.

Alaska is a beautiful state. One of the most breathtaking features of Alaska is the mountain range. Mount McKinley is located in Alaska and is 6,194 meters high. Alaska also boast numerous seas in which visitors and locals alike enjoy fishing from. The largest seas are Bencharof, Iliamna, Nakmet an Ugashilk.

Alaska is famous due to the gold-rush at the end of the 19th century and because of its important oil fields in the Prudhoe

Answer 4

The article is excellent, however there are still one or two mistakes like beginning Capital with a 'K' very Deutsch. The use of 'ist for is a slip of the pen. It is better to say that"surrounding Alaska are seas where fishing is excellent"
Since Alaska is a country it cannot contain a sea, in the fullest sense. It is incorrect to say"you can go fishing there very well".
Apart from that, great work.
Were you ever in England on student language courses? I feel as though I recognise the work.

Answer 5

I will give this a try in German. Hopefully I will not get my answer flagged and erased. (I thought it would be easier for you to understand in German and I could use the practice).

Ich hatte nicht Deutsches in einer langen Zeit gesprochen.

ich wohnte in Alaska. Das grammer in Ihrem Versuch war “OK”.

In der Linie “The kapital city is Juneau“ wenn seien Sie “The capital city is Juneau”

In der Linie “In Gernamy, there about 280 people per square kilometer“ wenn seien Sie “In Germany…” (Deutchland ist fehlbuchstabiert auf englisch)

In der Linie “That ist 700 hundred “ wenn seien Sie “That is 700 hundred” (is, nicht ist)

Becharof, Iliamna, und Ugashik sind Seen (lakes auf englisch), nicht Meere (seas). Ich habe nicht Nakmet gehört

Ich würde das letzte sentance in zwei sentances bilden (Es klingt wie Prudhoe geschah im 19. Jahrhundert)

Answer 6

dollars doesnt need to be capitalized
capital has a c on the beginning of it
always spell out numbers when doing compositions
four not 4
after half a million people .....That starts a new sentsence

Answer 7

Kapital is spelled Capital. Looks good to me!

Answer 8

the 49th state of the U.S.

Area: 1,717,855 km²

Population
- Total (2000) 626,932
- Density 0.42/km²

Germany:
Area: Total 357,050 km²

Population
- 2006 estimate 82,310,000
- Density 230.9 /km²

Answer 9

not bad
pretty good for a german dude

Answer 10

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