In her essay, ‘Equal Share of Miseries’, Milena Tomol, compares the miseries in her home country of Russia, where there is a lack of material blessings, verses the miseries she observes here in Canada, where there is material blessings.
this is the first sentence of my summary, so it needs all this information...
2007-03-26 07:25:10 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Higher Education (University +)
The sentence loses its power because it is too long. You should break it down to either two or three sentences. For example, In her essay "Equal Share of Miseries," Milena Tomol compares the miseries in her native Russia with the miseries in her new homeland Canada. In Russia, there is a lack of material blessings. In Canada, there is material blessings. Both bring miseries.
2007-03-26 07:49:15 · answer #1 · answered by mac 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
In her essay "Equal Share of Miseries" Milena Tomol compares the miseries in her home country of Russia, where there is a lack of material blessings, with the miseries she observes here in Canada, where there are material blessings.
2007-03-26 14:42:29 · answer #2 · answered by CanProf 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋