For my pearl harbor essay...my thesis statement is Pearl harbor bombing changed many people lives?

Question

For my outline ..the introduction part says my thesis statement what 3 supports can i add to that for my outline?

Answer 1

Well it's Pearl Harbor and it affected just about everyone in this country and most of the world too. I would make your thesis a little less broad.
You could tell about how it affected the people at Pearl Harbor
1)people on ships
2)attackers
3)rescuers (Affected all of these people in different ways)
the families of the sailors killed at pearl Harbor
1)Actual Family
2)Friends
3)Soldiers (All of which is their family in different ways)
How changed world
1)We entered the war
2)Freed a lot of people from Nazis
3)Brought back peace

Hope that helps you a little

Answer 2

OK, your first issue is that you wrote a question not a statement. A thesis statement is an arguable opinion, it is what you are defending and proving throughout your paper, and it is the central point of your whole paper. Here are a couple of examples of thesis statements to help you:

After analyzing the situation thoroughly, most people will agree that high school students should be allowed to take educational trips to foreign countries.

Although my family and I have taken many wonderful vacations, none was more fun and exciting than our camping trip to the Grand Canyon.

Your thesis does not necessarily have to be as long or complex as these (these have a moderate length and complexity). But it MUST state the opinion you will prove and defend in your paper; that's non-negotiable.

Does that help?

Answer 3

For one example of how the Japanese bombing of Pearl Harbor changed many peoples lives have a look at the case Korematsu v United States of America where the federal government implemented a law banning Japanese Americans from living on the Pacific coast, forcing them to move to relocation centres, which were in effect internment camps.

Answer 4

Hey for the guy that is putting you down about grammar and all that, don't listen he probably is a school drop out his self. Pearl Harbor changed lives of many Thur changes of communication, economics, and future use of weapons of mass destruction. and so on and so on .. Hope this helped!

Answer 5

Use examples of the lives of a member of the armed forces, an adult civilian, and a civilian child. Tell how each of them found life was different after the attack on Pearl Harbor.
Don't forget to use spell check.
Hints: battles, factories, shortages

Answer 6

If you intend to compose a comprehensible essay you might start by learning to use grammar and language and spelling and punctuation.