I would like to know the correctness of the following statement
"We already had meeting with that group and they are aware of the changes we are going to implement"
2007-03-26 03:55:28 · 7 answers · asked by ajaison 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
We've met with that group and they've been apprised of the upcoming changes to be implemented.
2007-03-26 07:53:52 · answer #1 · answered by Just Me 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
We have already commenced a meeting with that group; and they are aware of the changes that will be implemented."
2007-03-26 12:33:18 · answer #2 · answered by Sarah S 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
"We had a meeting with that group, and they are aware of the changes we will be implementing." has a better flow to it, and says the same thing.
2007-03-26 11:03:40 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
We met with the group and they are aware of the implemented changes ???
Or you could just add (a) between had and meeting!!
Good luck!
2007-03-26 11:01:02 · answer #4 · answered by reggiethecokegirl 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
"We already had ( A ) meeting with that group and they ( WERE ) aware of the changes we (WERE ) going to implement"
2007-03-26 11:00:20 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
too wordy...you can say more with fewer words.
No need for "already" or any adverb in this note.
omission of "a"..."a"meeting. It would be more concise to state..."We met with...."
Hopefully the group was "made aware of the changes..." Time will tell. Why not "..,to inform them..."
We met with the group to inform them of our changes.
2007-03-26 11:17:35 · answer #6 · answered by tichur 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds good, just need to add a "a" between "had" and "meeting". So it should say " We already had a meeting..."
2007-03-26 10:58:55 · answer #7 · answered by shakensunshine86 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋