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I am writing a paper.The following is the abstract.Do I express it correctly,if not,please help me.Thanks a lot!
Abstract: With the development of beef cattle breeding industry and the popularization of computer application technology in China, the intelligent decision-making system for beef cattle production is an effective way to extend beef cattle breeding technology .This paper focuses on the exploring the beef cattle intelligence decision-making system ,basing on the researching of system module design, the development strategy and its special functions .
Key words: beef cattle；intelligent decision-making system；development strategy

2007-03-24 17:24:16 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help

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looks great to me!

have a nice day!

2007-03-24 17:45:53 · answer #1 · answered by sharrron 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋

Sorry, but this isn't an abstract- a proper one anyway. If you want my help just let me know and I'll give you some pointers.

2007-03-25 01:03:54 · answer #2 · answered by Jules 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋