All of these lines across my face
Tell you the story of who I am
So many stories of where I've been
And how I got to where I am
But these stories don't mean anything
When you've got no one to tell them to
It's true...I was made for you
I climbed across the mountain tops
Swam all across the ocean blue
I crossed all the lines and I broke all the rules
But baby I broke them all for you
Because even when I was flat broke
You made me feel like a million bucks
Yeah you do and I was made for you
You see the smile that's on my mouth
Is hiding the words that don't come out
And all of my friends who think that I'm blessed
They don't know my head is a mess
No, they don't know who I really am
And they don't know what I've been through but you do
And I was made for you...
2007-03-24 17:23:34 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
Brandi Carlile
2007-03-24 17:35:10 · update #1
Stop pitying yourself. You seem to be craving to be left alone - see the use of the word 'alone' in your question.
However it is nice that you find constructive energies from your loneliness - like this seems to be your first poetry.
2007-03-25 03:36:45 · answer #1 · answered by smartobees 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats very good.
As dark and disturbing as you think it may be, maybe you should start a myspace account and share some of your writing with the rest of the world. There are millions of people who are looking for it, you know. Your not alone. Share your grief and resentment with the rest of the world, and someday you'll find help. Its probably already there....
2007-03-25 00:33:04 · answer #2 · answered by Jim M 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are you the person in the poem or what? Are you really lonely or did you just want to share this poem with us........? If you are so sad and lonely is it because of another person or do you feel like nobody really gets you....? .Are you depressed? To much left unsaid....personally I want to be able to say something to help but I need more.... contact me, I am here.
2007-03-25 02:49:58 · answer #3 · answered by She Said 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dont seek God or any of that Evengelical recruitment S***T. Order yourself. Get pissed off. Hell you can even become the antichrist if you want. Go get some beer bottles and throw them at something, that always helps.
2007-03-25 00:46:46 · answer #4 · answered by DisOrder 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
seek God through his Word [The Holy Bible], I know what you feel like I once was like that 24hrs, now I'm free of that bondage.
God Bless.
2007-03-25 00:31:47 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋