Wake up.
Looking out the window.
Hoping for a beautiful day.
As I quikly loose that hope.
The day has never looked so dreadful.
So dead.
As I sit here in this classroom.
Surrounded by friends. And lovers.
I'v never felt so alone.
I'v always been alone.
I walk these evening streets.
The day is so dead.
The silence chills my spine.
And all I get is rain, rain, rain.
And I could really use a rainbow.
I wipe these tears once more. stareing down at the floor. Wishing to scream. Wishing to be heard. Wanting to run. But I want so much. End this. End this now. Where do I go. Why can't I hide? All this does is eat away myinsides. And scream. If only you would hear me. If only you would save me.
Life has never felt so dead.
And death has never felt so alive.
I'v never felt so alone.
But I'v always been alone.
I also have one quote for you.
I know you can see me. I know you can hear me. But thats not what I want. I want you to look at me. I want you to listen to me.
what 1 do you like best?
2007-03-24 16:45:15 · 22 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Needs a little connection line per line but it's kinda OK.
2007-03-26 18:01:10 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dude, cheer up. The best songs ever written were not sad ones.. today there's enough artists taking advantage of depression and sadness. Try and think of how lyrics can effect those who hear them, if it's an inspiring song filled with hope and life.. maybe they will be that much happier about their life. Music is power.
2007-03-24 16:54:58 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Do I like it? No, those were some of the worst lyrics I've ever read. Your rhymes sucked, you repeated yourself like every other sentence and you can't spell. Stareing? Lmao. I've bought cd's for a dollar and they've had a lot more talent than this.
2007-03-24 16:52:31 · answer #3 · answered by C J 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's so depressing... Sounded like a happy spring song at the beginning.
2007-03-24 16:48:06 · answer #4 · answered by Knee 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You can definitely write a song. I like all of the verses.
2007-03-24 16:48:48 · answer #5 · answered by whrldpz 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah its too bad there isnt a way to hear what it would sound like in a song
2007-03-24 16:49:44 · answer #6 · answered by jaclyn 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Quite nice!
2007-03-24 16:47:46 · answer #7 · answered by snapdragon747 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats pretty dang good it would help me if i knew the music it went to but still nice.
2007-03-24 16:50:01 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
well its sad and good but i dont knoe the part where its says end this i dont like it
2007-03-24 16:48:44 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Too emo for me. Sorry.
2007-03-24 16:57:32 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋