STRANGER OR ANGEL?
A girl held out her hand to me and I just turned away
I just wasn’t in the mood to make new friends today.
Besides, she didn’t look the type that I would hang around
So when she tried to talk to me,,,,I just turned her down.
She said, “Well, , when you’re ready, I’ll try again someday”
And then she smiled a little smile,, and turned and walked away
And I could see tears in her eyes, but didn’t really care
Not thinking that I might have hurt my “Angel Unaware”
Because you see, you don’t “pick” friends,,,,,God sends them here to you
To be there when you’re down and out and help to see you through
But even more important, He also chooses you
To be there for somebody else,,,, to be their angel too
So, if you turn them down, it might be God you turn away
And maybe miss the chance to change somebody’s life today
Be mindful of all strangers, and let them know you care
For doing so, they might just be your “Angel, Unaware”
2007-03-24 16:41:58 · 15 answers · asked by codiane99 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
I like it!!! I really did! It made me realize... all those people i've turned down because they don't fit in my standards, those people i've judged before knowing them, they might be the people that i'm looking for now, people who will understand this problem that i'm going through and won't think i'm being arrogant and a feeler.
2007-03-25 04:00:14 · answer #1 · answered by Samarah 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice. It seems like a prose but also has a poetic touch in it. If modified a bit, this can also be made into a beautiful song.
2007-03-25 00:18:14 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very good,however you need to omit the word here in God sends them here to you.Keep up the good work it really made me think.
2007-03-24 23:52:07 · answer #3 · answered by metcalfmaintenance1 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The writing aspects are great! Keep up the good work.
The subject matter....... very debatable!
2007-03-25 03:26:45 · answer #4 · answered by Izen G 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is a really pretty peom to read
Good job
2007-03-24 23:45:23 · answer #5 · answered by sarah 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I absolutely love it! This is a beautiful poem - have you thought about reading it to your church group?
2007-03-24 23:49:46 · answer #6 · answered by Blinkin 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it's great!! Wow, honestly, it's really good! Nice job! :)
2007-03-24 23:51:10 · answer #7 · answered by bridgetsmomma621 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
you should submit this in a paper a book or a contest it is excellent
2007-03-24 23:49:32 · answer #8 · answered by undercovernudist 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Awesome. Really made me think.
2007-03-25 00:22:00 · answer #9 · answered by vizavis321 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
extrodianry out of this world
2007-03-24 23:49:06 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋