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ok i need help writing a rap or poem for this girl,

her names celeste and shes like my sunshine on a cloudy day.
celeste and i have been friends for the longest time, and we've seem to become more then friends.the only problem is thar shes scared to get with me bc shes been hurt som many times.

i want to dedicate something to her that can say all that and this, "dont let anyone ever promise you that they wont hurt you
because at one time or another it will happen. the real promise
is if the time you spend together is worth the pain"


can someone pls help me, i would greatly appreciate it

2007-03-24 16:29:08 · 10 answers · asked by youre a square 2 in Arts & Humanities Other - Arts & Humanities

10 answers

r u gay?

2007-03-24 16:31:13 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 2

here u go

she
the prettiest flower
she
the loveliest rose
she the beautifulest creature existing
she
she surpasses the meaning of beauty herself
She's the finest red red rose
and like her there is no other
she's beautiful from the feet to the body to the face
She's
She's the imperfect perfection
Yes, that is what I call her
She's soft and so gentle
She smells like fresh air

On rainy days that bring splendor
to her i would compare

She's a peace of heaven here on earth
She's been lend to us by the creator
She's more than an Angel
She's my wish
my want
SHE"S

SHE is You

ps..u can tell her u wrote but dont post it any where else only for her

2007-03-27 19:45:50 · answer #2 · answered by angiesupers 2 · 0 0

I turned my back
On the edge of the cliff
And watched as you
Walked away
My eyes screamed
For you
But I was unable
To speak a word

One step back
Towards the edge
Is all it could’ve taken
For me to leave
All of my pain
A quick fall
To the earth below
Taking my life
Ending it all

I saw your
Pace start to slow
A few more steps
Stopped
Turning
You faced me
Mascara
On your cheeks

Everything enjoyable
About you to me
Flooded my head
Able to
Breathe again
I dropped
A tear

You fell
To your knees
Extending your arms
Reaching
I stepped away
From the edge
And held you
The rest of the night

2007-03-25 01:06:06 · answer #3 · answered by ? 1 · 0 0

1. Wifey
2. Boo
3. Bitches
4. Hoes

1)Wifey is irreplaceable.. but she is the only one that is irreplaceable.. She is the girl that the guy loves and will always loves, and he never wants to see her with another man.. But.. He will cheat on her with Boo, Bitches, and Hoes until he is mature enough to realize that if he loses his Wifey he would be screwed, and NEVER be happy again..

2) Boo is replaceable, she thinks she's Wifey, but will NEVER be Wifey because Wifey was made Wifey is irreplaceable.. she can NEVER replace her.. Boo tries to take Wifeys spot, but once she attempts, the guy allows her to get a TASTE of Wifey's spot... but will NEVER achieve her spot for any longer than a few months, then the man goes back to Wifey.. And Boo either gets replaced with another Boo, or, the man matures and decides that Wifey is the one for him.. (Ladies.. you don't want to be BOO)

3) Bitches.. A female that a male uses only for sex or other sexually related events..Dat call when Wifey acting up and you need a quick nut. The ***** is the first one running there.

4) Hoes.. enough said! Trying to move up in life, Wants to be a ***** or a Boo. Hoes are just the girls you bag for no reason and have them in your phone. Backups incase a ***** or a boo slips up. Then you replace with a hoe

2007-03-24 23:33:56 · answer #4 · answered by tuzsday r 1 · 0 1

More than you'll ever know, you are my friend.
A friendship like this runs through time with no end.
I can't promise that others won't hurt you,
because it'll happen as sure as the rain.
But remember the time you have together, is always worth the pain.

2007-03-24 23:36:19 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

Nothing keeps her down

she walks alone

To her own music

her heart sings

she whiles away the time

and dances through each day

then she laughs and walks away

she walks alone.

OR

And so it begins,

the calm before the storm.

She waits, gathering strength

and confidence-the approaching

strife shall not carry her away.

Through song she finds

her comfort; through her

muse she creates solace. Passing

dreams fade into the night, but

fear will not contain her as

the vacant wind blows. Hope

through the days drive the

tests through time, and her

strength will carry her through

each day, creating her own pace

and her own melody.
*****************************

***Just remember about copyright laws, ok? I write, that's what I do. :-)

2007-03-24 23:34:50 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0 2

You were with me
for everything
you were with me
when I needed
you
And you were with me
when no one else was there
I can't promise that
I will never hurt you
If I did I would by lying
But I can say this
When I do hurt you
I will be there with you
Trying to feel the pain
That I inflicted
The time we spend together
Will make our relationship
Worth it.

2007-03-24 23:34:26 · answer #7 · answered by Dan-Bi 3 · 0 2

Homosexuality is decadent. It is a sin and unless you repent and turn to Christ Jesus you will die in your sin and go to Hell. Please don't do that instead ask a born again Christian about being saved from your sin.

2007-03-24 23:36:51 · answer #8 · answered by sean e 4 · 0 1

why don't u just tell her what u wrote tell her something from your heart. tell her about all the little things she does that brighten up your day. all the little things that u notice.

2007-03-24 23:36:24 · answer #9 · answered by coolbeans_kc 2 · 1 1

if you really cared you would write it yourself
.............................................. btw, ^this^ is how you spell "write"

2007-03-24 23:33:36 · answer #10 · answered by missingfeet 2 · 0 1

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