I wrote this poem, please be honest and if you can, can you possibly help me come up with a title for it??? Thanks a lot.
Life is like a tree.
Everyone wants to grow up to be as tall and as strong as the tree in their backyard.
All the leaves represent all the memories we have had in our lives.
The ones that fall to the ground, are the ones that arent meant to be while the ones that stay are the ones that remain forever in our hearts.
Like us, the trees live on until they no longer can, then they die.
Then, they are miracuously given a second chance by having their seeds replanted just like our heaven.
So when I look at life, I think of that tree, that big strong tree.
2007-03-24 14:15:59 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Home & Garden ➔ Garden & Landscape
thanks. ill try and do that for you
2007-03-24 14:39:41 · update #1
I think the first line in your poem should be the title. I'm happy you love trees, I have certain trees that remind me of my brother who passed away a few years ago, and when I was young my best friend was a giant old Oak tree {I'm not loony},I love your poem, keep up the writing and let us read them. Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2007-03-24 15:13:04 · answer #1 · answered by watergoddess53 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
OMGosh!!! That is soooooo awesome! It really makes sense and means a lot! Yuo should make more poems and ask Yahoo! Answers if their good so we can just read them!
O, and by the way- the title should be something like: " A Strong Life, A Strong Tree" Actually, go with some other title like " Life as a Tree." I'm not a really good title maker...lol.
2007-03-24 21:25:50 · answer #2 · answered by *~<3~* Дпﺃмдℓ ℓo٧ε٢ *~<3~ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The Memory Tree The Tree Of life My Life's Tree
2007-03-25 01:53:44 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
a title should be very simple... so why not "life as a tree" or something like that..
it's a very good poem
2007-03-24 21:25:31 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's good but try to beat this one:
"Robyn"
It is crazy, it is idiotic.
It is all a vain illusion.
Stuck here in this rut they call Love.
Joy is what I should be living for.
Yes, I should flutter from joy to joy.
But you hold me back.
You make my life complete while holding me back at the same time.
I should forget you, but I do not want to.
2007-03-24 21:19:20 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I like what you wrote very much. I think that your format is actually prose tho, not poetry.
2007-03-24 21:27:55 · answer #6 · answered by lennie1226 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I liked it, it's very instrospective.
2007-03-24 21:20:25 · answer #7 · answered by Peter 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i like it...
2007-03-24 21:27:33 · answer #8 · answered by stormy4 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋