I'm 12 years old and I L.O.V.E to write. It's my favorite thing to do. Besides reading. =)
Anyways, I decided to write a book so here is chapter 1.
"Leave. You are not welcome here....” “You will suffer...” “Beware,
strangers, as we are not a friendly kind....” “We’ll steal your soul and derange your mind....”
Aubrey Taylor woke with a start, drenched in sweat. She felt her forehead with her hand, making sure she didn’t have a fever. When she was sure she didn’t, Aubrey crept out of bed and stood in front of a mirror that was hanging on the wall.
Aubrey’s face was flushed. She wiped the sweat off with her old T-Shirt and sat down on the creaky old bed she slept on, hands shaking.
“What an awful dream,” Aubrey muttered to herself. Indeed, the dream she was having was not a peaceful one. Aubrey had dreamed about a man and a woman with a baby in her arms, running through a dark, deserted village. The voices that followed them seemed haunted and ghostly.
2007-03-24 12:50:34 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Pregnancy & Parenting ➔ Adolescent
That's NOT all of chapter 1 people! That's just the begginng of it.
2007-03-24 12:50:57 · update #1
Thanks for being honest, ÃмÁЙḌẰ. =D
2007-03-24 12:56:25 · update #2
It's mainly for people who like Harry Potter...
2007-03-24 12:58:03 · update #3
Oh, and the top part is supposed to be in italics, but it doesn't show up in italics on here. =)
2007-03-24 12:58:50 · update #4
It's ok, ÃмÁЙḌẰ.. Lol. I don't hate you. I just want people to tell me the truth if they don't like it or not. =)
2007-03-24 13:01:05 · update #5
Thanks EVERYONE! I just want the truth. ^_^
2007-03-24 13:04:20 · update #6
i dont like it.... cause i dont like books like that i like the books about killing people and what nots.....dont hate me...
its all good! =)
2007-03-24 12:55:15 · answer #1 · answered by amanda[ILY!] 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hiya!
hun thats some great writing in there, are u sure ur 12 cause this soounds like what we do in english in yr 12 (australia).
great stuff cant wait 2 see ur latest book
good luck and keep going
2007-03-24 21:11:22 · answer #2 · answered by Katie L 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think this is really interesting i like reading books like this.
if you like books like this u should read:
Twilight and New Moon by Stephanie Meyer (i know the last name is right not completely sure about the first sorry oops)
A Great And Terrible Beauty and Rebel angels by Libba Bray
2007-03-24 20:18:34 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm 12 too and I am not some creepy adult man I think your book was awesome
2007-03-24 19:57:10 · answer #4 · answered by nellbellgirl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's too much like HP in my opinion. Just write your own stuff.
2007-03-24 20:06:52 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked it
2007-03-24 20:02:07 · answer #6 · answered by bvan_25 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good... give me more im a young author so if u need help email me .... id be glad to share my latest story with u to
2007-03-24 19:55:03 · answer #7 · answered by living the life 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh my gosh... I love it!
My name's Aubrey!
Not too often I come across it! =]
2007-03-24 20:09:37 · answer #8 · answered by spiffehdoo 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
what do you think of it,it is up to the writer to put all their hart and sol in to the book
2007-03-24 19:56:11 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i've seen better!
Good luck with that!
2007-03-24 20:09:07 · answer #10 · answered by ♥cutemamma♥ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋