ok here is this thing i wrote. i meant it to be a poem but it dont really rhyme at all. but not all poems have to rhyme.. just tell me what you think of it>>
I want you too make me cry,
but only if it's because we're laughing so hard.
I want you too keep me warm,
by hugging me when its cold outside.
I want you too tell me I'm beatuiful,
even when i think im not.
I want you too be able to go a day without callin me,
but only beacuse im already there with you.
I want you too say 'I Love You',
but only if you really mean it.
2007-03-24 10:17:26 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
oops. yeah, i had grammer and spellin mistakes but i was tryin to type and think fast. and things get messed up wen i do that.lol.
2007-03-24 12:50:13 · update #1
I like it and it says what comes from your heart and the only one it should matter to and mean something to is you because you are the only one who knows what part of your heart that came from and if there's any memories behind it, which to me sounds like it does. Keep up the good work.
2007-03-24 10:23:39 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I like it.
and not all poems are sup. 2
2007-03-24 10:30:36 · answer #2 · answered by Ghost Drift 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it does not matter if it is not good that poem is special in it's own way
2007-03-24 10:22:29 · answer #3 · answered by rockergirltaytay 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
1000000000000000000000000000000... THAT ROCK'D THE EARTH!
2007-03-24 10:23:55 · answer #4 · answered by Lacadema (Role-player) 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is a good poem, i can relate to this too
2007-03-24 10:21:07 · answer #5 · answered by !~*brianna*~! 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's beautiful!!
2007-03-24 10:21:14 · answer #6 · answered by CTU 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
OMG, i LOVE that poem!!!!! you are a wonderful poet!!!!!
2007-03-24 14:56:01 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it
2007-03-24 10:20:18 · answer #8 · answered by chatterboxx777 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
10 outta 10 :D:D:D!
2007-03-24 10:21:39 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
good one. but you spelled beautiful wrong.
2007-03-24 10:22:05 · answer #10 · answered by it's me 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋