If i'm lucky, this will the bthe last song
the last song i write
that makes me think of you
aall night
Because we're only pretending
that life is fair
we're only mending
the ones that don't care
and when its all over
you can know that
i'll stll be waiting
for my torn heart to heal
for the gaps in my love
to dissapear.
Ok, im only 13... keep that in mind ! THANKS A TON!
2007-03-24 10:09:03 · 13 answers · asked by ♥besnazzy♥ 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
sorry, i didn't see some of those spelling errors.
2007-03-24 10:09:31 · update #1
That's really good. Sounds like you've been through a bit. Keep writing, go big. Remember me. Hehe.
2007-03-24 10:18:32 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's cute but it needs work and you must have been hurt by a boy before in order for those feelings to come out like that.
2007-03-24 17:14:48 · answer #2 · answered by ktn06041980 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah they sound great. :D for keep up the good work 8 outta 10
2007-03-24 17:11:44 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
right noe it more of a poem i write songs personally but i dont even know how that would sound but hey when i was 13 i didnt write things like that i was wosre but ovet ime i just got naturally better..
2007-03-24 17:13:19 · answer #4 · answered by Kneisha G 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Maybe you should stick to whatever you like instead of making lyrics like these
2007-03-24 17:12:54 · answer #5 · answered by Beautomous 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
little to dramatic.......listen to some new love songs, like the glamouros, pick a topic and make it a love topic.
2007-03-24 17:12:19 · answer #6 · answered by l3yrdman 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are only 13!!!! Thats pretty good, Hey id buy it.........Hot, young talent, thats what im talkin about.........Keep at it babygirl!!!!
2007-03-24 17:18:33 · answer #7 · answered by KATRINA A 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
omg that was wounderful keep goin u probley can mac more
2007-03-24 17:11:39 · answer #8 · answered by leelee 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
OMG THATS SOOOOOO GOOD go ahead and make more! ur talented! good luck
2007-03-24 17:11:34 · answer #9 · answered by MiMi™ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Damn your good. You have a lot of talent!
2007-03-24 17:11:39 · answer #10 · answered by allllie. 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋