thesis statement?

Question

Is this a strong thesis?If not how can i revise it? plz help!

Teenage girls can easily relate to Avril Lavigne’s music because most of her songs talk about breaking up in relationships and many of these girls face this problem in their lives today.

Thanks, in advance!

Answer 1

Fairly good. I would edit a couple of words to make it more direct-here's what I mean-

Teenage girls easily relate to Avril Lavigne's music because the majority of her songs are about break-ups and many of these young women face the same problem in their lives today.

Just a little more polished and direct.

Answer 2

Uhhm you could say..

Avril Lavigne's music is widely accepted by today's adolescents. The majority of her songs deal with relationship problems - which is a subject most teens face, so it is not difficult for them to relate.

(A thesis can be two sentences, just make sure that one of the two had the basic infomration on what you're trying to say)

Answer 3

so your going to talk about how Avril Lavigne's music relates to teenage girl's lives? Seems decent.