I love you for your understanding, compassion, kindness, humor, the way you feel, the way you treat others.
2007-03-24
02:59:55
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I need to know do i need the word and before "the way.... and then do i need a second and before the last "and the way... Any writing professional or someone with excellent writing skills please reply, thanks
2007-03-24
03:01:06 ·
update #1
"I love you for your compassion, kindness, understanding, your humour, the way you feel and the way you treat others."
I went in alphabetical, then in increasing length of concept.
Sounds fine to me.
2007-03-24 03:04:30
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answered by Anonymous
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I love you not only for your understanding but also for your compassion and kindness as well as your humor and the way you feel; most of all, I like the way you treat others.
Suggestion: I would take out "the way you feel" as it does not seem to fit well with the rest. Moreover, kindness and compassion are already feelings, anyway.
2007-03-24 10:10:33
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answered by Anpadh 6
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It is for your understanding, your compassion, your kindness, and humor; the way you feel, the way you treat others, that I love you.
2007-03-24 10:16:40
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answered by Anonymous
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You need the word "and" before the final item in a series.
So, your sentence would be
I love you for your understanding, compassion, kindness, humor, the way you feel, and the way you treat others.
There is a debate about whether you need the final comma. I always use it as it removes all doubt about meaning.
2007-03-24 10:09:16
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answered by audreytheeditor 4
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I would go with this for added emotion:
I love you for your understanding, for your compassion, for your kindness, for your sense of humor, and undoubtingly for the way you treat others.
2007-03-24 10:13:54
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answered by P J 1
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It "flows better" to write: "I love you for your understanding, compassion, kindness, and humor. Also, the way you feel and treat others."
2007-03-24 10:06:31
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answered by Anonymous
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end the sentence with "and the way you treat othersevery other part is right.
2007-03-24 10:11:24
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answered by luminous 7
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