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I love you for your understanding, compassion, kindness, humor, the way you feel, the way you treat others.

2007-03-24 02:59:55 · 7 answers · asked by bobravers 1 in Education & Reference Words & Wordplay

I need to know do i need the word and before "the way.... and then do i need a second and before the last "and the way... Any writing professional or someone with excellent writing skills please reply, thanks

2007-03-24 03:01:06 · update #1

7 answers

"I love you for your compassion, kindness, understanding, your humour, the way you feel and the way you treat others."

I went in alphabetical, then in increasing length of concept.
Sounds fine to me.

2007-03-24 03:04:30 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

I love you not only for your understanding but also for your compassion and kindness as well as your humor and the way you feel; most of all, I like the way you treat others.

Suggestion: I would take out "the way you feel" as it does not seem to fit well with the rest. Moreover, kindness and compassion are already feelings, anyway.

2007-03-24 10:10:33 · answer #2 · answered by Anpadh 6 · 0 1

It is for your understanding, your compassion, your kindness, and humor; the way you feel, the way you treat others, that I love you.

2007-03-24 10:16:40 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

You need the word "and" before the final item in a series.

So, your sentence would be

I love you for your understanding, compassion, kindness, humor, the way you feel, and the way you treat others.

There is a debate about whether you need the final comma. I always use it as it removes all doubt about meaning.

2007-03-24 10:09:16 · answer #4 · answered by audreytheeditor 4 · 0 0

I would go with this for added emotion:

I love you for your understanding, for your compassion, for your kindness, for your sense of humor, and undoubtingly for the way you treat others.

2007-03-24 10:13:54 · answer #5 · answered by P J 1 · 0 1

It "flows better" to write: "I love you for your understanding, compassion, kindness, and humor. Also, the way you feel and treat others."

2007-03-24 10:06:31 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0 2

end the sentence with "and the way you treat othersevery other part is right.

2007-03-24 10:11:24 · answer #7 · answered by luminous 7 · 0 0

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