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You have my heart in your hands
Grasp it gently, sincerely, and it shall remain
Grasp it too lightly, and it may fall through you fingertips
Take me seriously, take me away with you
Grip it tautly, but not …
Everytime you talk, you touch my heart
Everytime you smile, my breath escapes me
You have my heart, luckily just a piece
For fate has stricken, it has smitten me down
My heart that
You hold my heart in your hands
Hold it lightly, for we tread on hallow ground
Too loose and itll fall from your grasp
Too tightly and
2007-03-23 23:24:25 · 2 answers · asked by roncho 4 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
thanks genius...thats why im asking for assistance;not a rating and thats being kind. Its in pieces, i need help putting it together.
2007-03-23 23:40:32 · update #1
You have my heart in your hands
Grasp it lovingly and tenderly
And take me seriously
Take me away with you!
Your touch
Your smile
Quickens my heart beat -
My love
This heart,
is yours to
hold tight with love
Dont let it fall!
2007-03-24 00:17:26 · answer #1 · answered by iscan12345 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The only finish you should give this conflicting rubbish is to start again and think about it a bit more I give you 2 out of ten and that's generous
2007-03-24 06:34:53 · answer #2 · answered by burning brightly 7 · 0⤊ 2⤋