Grammar check this to see if everything is in past tense and using only active voice (no passive voice).?

Question

One last thing, if you can make it shorter without taking any facts away would be great.


At 2220 hours I was dispatched to 3880 willow st., Costa Mesa, CA 92344 to investigate a reported spousal abuse. On arrival I met with the victim, Jane Wesson.

Jane told me his husband, Bill Wesson, came home from work reek of alcohol. He had an interview that wasn’t successful. They started fighting and one thing led to another. He grabbed her by the neck and slap her left cheek with his right hand.

I asked Bill if he was hurt and he said no. I told him he is being arrested for domestic violence. I told him to turn around, put his hand behind his head and spread his leg.

Evidence
1) Photograph: 1) Neck.
2) Left cheek, Right Cheek, Full Headshot.

Forward this report to the investigation division

Answer 1

At 2220 hours, I was dispatched to 3330 Willow St,. Costa Mesa, CA. 92344. I investigated a reported spousal abuse.

On my arrival, I took a statement from Jane Wesson In her statement, the victim claimed that her husband Bill Wesson came home from work reeking of alcohol. Mrs. Wesson said that he had an unsuccessful interview. The two of them began arguing and that the disagreement escalated to a physical altercation.

The victim then stated that her husband, Bill grabbed her by the neck and slapped her left cheek with his right hand.

I took a statement from the accused Bill Wesson. I asked him if he had been hurt in the altercation. His reply was no. I informed Mr. Wesson that he was being arrested for domestic violence. I then asked the accused to turn around,
place his hands behind his head and to spread his legs.

Evidence gathered was photographs taken of the victim's

1)Neck, 2)Left Cheek, 3)Right Cheek,
4) Full head shot.

I then Forwarded my report to the Investigation Division.


You said nothing of reading him his rights. That might be important. You might also want to add weather or not the accused was taken into custody or not.

Answer 2

At 2220 hours they dispatched me to 3880 willow st., Costa Mesa, CA 92344 to investigate a reported spousal abuse. On arrival I met with the victim, Jane Wesson.
Jane told me her husband, Bill Wesson, came home from work reek of alcohol. He had an interview that wasn’t successful. They started fighting and one thing led to another. He grabbed her by the neck and slap her left cheek with his right hand.
i asked Bill if he was hurt and he said no. I told him we were arresting him for domestic violence. I told him to turn around, put his hand behind his head and spread his leg.

Answer 3

At 2220 hours I was dispatched [was dispatched is passive. Change to something like -I recveived a dispatch, if you require active voice] to 3880 willow st., Costa Mesa, CA 92344 to investigate a reported spousal abuse. On [change to Upon] arrival I met with the victim, Jane Wesson.

Jane told me [HER] husband, Bill Wesson, came home from work reek[ING] of alcohol. He had an interview that wasn’t successful. They started fighting and one thing led to another. He grabbed her by the neck and slap[ED] her left cheek with his right hand.

I asked Bill if he was hurt and he said no. I told him he is being arrested [is being -is passive - change to - I was arresting him - if you require active voice] for domestic violence. I told him to turn around, put his hand[s] behind his head and spread his leg[s].

Evidence
1)Photograph: 1) Neck.
2) Left cheek, Right Cheek, Full Headshot.

Forward this report to the investigation division.

Answer 4

Was dispatched is passive. Who dispatched you?

"Sam dispatched me at 2220 hours to..."

However, this will confuse the order of action and add some information that may not be important.

Passive voice ain't so bad; it has it's uses.

Answer 5

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Answer 6

I notice a grammatical error but its not about being past tense or active voice. The part about how his wife said he came home " reek " of alcohol . should be " reeking"

Answer 7

1. at 2220 hours they dispatched me to.......

and also there is another mistake

2. i asked Bill if he hurt himself
all the rest is right

Answer 8

The correct spelling of the word "reek" is "wreak" and it should be "wreaking"