Someone wrote this for me once... I have allways loved it...
I'm lonely and empty
Just sad all around
I beg and I pray
to just hear the sound
of your voice and your laughter
the feel of your touch
your smile is beautiful
Damn!
I miss you so much.
2007-03-23 19:06:42 · 13 answers · asked by Steelersfan 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Hi Lissa,
The underlying (unspoken) theme in this poem indicates that
the author is infatuated deeply, in love with love, and also has
a hidden fear of losing the object of his love. The biggest
drawback in the poem is the word "damn", because it's not
as positive as the rest of the poem. Also, the author shows a
small tendency toward possessiveness.
2007-03-23 19:23:57 · answer #1 · answered by SlownEasy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think this poem brings out alot of emotion for a person who just lost a loved one. But it also kind of encourages one to sit and stew in the mire and continue to be sad and unconsollable. It could be used to show feelings after breaking up in a relationship. I guess it lets a person grieve, but only so much of that is healthy.
2007-03-24 02:13:33 · answer #2 · answered by Beverly 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I agree with Mira B. And the poem's okay, but it's nothing impressive and kind of cliche. You could try making it longer and writing it so that it flows better.
2007-03-24 02:15:10 · answer #3 · answered by girl4christ87 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sweet feelings to a lover.I wanna a change the word Damn!
2007-03-24 02:50:59 · answer #4 · answered by Rahman r 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i liked it. but it kinda depends what the meaning is.....if it was about a breakup than its a tad bit obsessive but if its about something happening to u like u moving or something and they wrote u this poem as a good bye than awwww..â¥it
2007-03-24 02:20:58 · answer #5 · answered by !groovy_chicky! 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good to hear from the loved one
2007-03-24 02:15:12 · answer #6 · answered by sweetie 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats nice!!!!someone wrote it for u.
ur lucky that someone cares and misses u so much that it was expressed in the form of a poem.really very very nice!!
2007-03-24 02:19:50 · answer #7 · answered by niki 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Stupidly bad.
2007-03-24 02:15:22 · answer #8 · answered by joey k 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice, but I would search for another word to replace "Damn!", it just ruins everything.
2007-03-24 02:11:21 · answer #9 · answered by Mira 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah i agree, lose the 'damn' try smthin else.
overall it's a good poem.
2007-03-24 07:30:21 · answer #10 · answered by riya 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋