I would like your opinion on this poem, please?

Question

I would like to know what goes on inside of you when you read this, what you felt after having read it & what you think of it. Also what your interpretation is of what this poem is trying to express.

Feel through nature

Like seeds that have yet to sprout
And beautiful creatures in spring get out
Like the rain and the rays up in the sky
and blooming flowers not looked upon die
All flowed like a river stream
An unknown journey through the high and unseen
Feeling like the wind blowing into a mystery
Not concerned about what is, but free and happy to be
Encouraged in the journey for knowledge
Boundaries were set and put out on a map
A flag put upon land where all got turned back
To all the good comes an end,
where the correlation of everything seeps through like sand
The familiar got put to a stumble,
which made an unfinished structure crumble

If this poem confuses you, as I know it will have that effect on many, try reading it again. If u still can't get out of it, then just try 2 tell me what you think of it. Confusion is 1 of the things I wanted 2 get out, but not so much so that u don't know what's written, but so u can still read between the lines

Answer 1

Wow, it's wonderful. It speaks to what the human experience is really about. We are all big bundles of undiscovered potential. We travel through life, oftentimes unnoticed, frequently not knowing ourselves even what things we may influence for better and worse. We're all just waiting to see what way the wind will blow us and see what there when we get there.

This poem not only reflects the human experience in it's metaphor, it reflects it in it's development, beginning in a seed and eventually after periods of blooming, wandering, curiosity, discovery, ownership, and entropy, we wind up crumbled.

It's not sad, it's kind of, ....yeah, I had it right the first time. Wonderful

Answer 2

It sprouted a few seeds
in the spring of a few creatures,
who looked up to the sky,
for Rays and the rains,
and for the blossoms and drains,
to convert into streams of water.

Always flowing through ,
the lands of the known and the Mystery,
of the knowledge and the cemetry.

which puts the whole,
this Universe,
into an unending mirage,

Answer 3

I think this poem is talkin about somone's life, he starts as a seed and egins growingm and In his life there are pifalls and problems such as the winds blowing in different directions showing that you can not really predict what will happen in life, And the part of the boudaries and the map shows that somtimes we feel that we are not given enough freedome, that somtimes are parents want to control our life, so we may somtimes feel like a plant, rooted in the ground, not able to move

Answer 4

I appreciate & read poetry, however I was not moved by this piece.

I felt it lacked conviction of the soul and depth of emotion. Poetry should seduce the reader, even when the topic is not seductive.

Answer 5

Well, I don't think the last two lines fit very well with the rest of the poem. Also, it never gets around to exactly what you are talking about. We're just kidding hanging here wondering exactly what you are talkign about.

Answer 6

Uggh, I hate preaching. Also, if you are going to be so literal, why don't you just write a statement instead. You seem to know so much more than us all. Please lead us, great one. The world is perhaps not ready for your wisdom because we cannot understand you all-important message cloaked in cliche and rambling.

Answer 7

Ummm, is it a poem or just doggerel?