If I Take A Few MCR Songs And Make A Story Out Of It…
Let’s say Gerard was the guy… and Helena was his girlfriend…
It starts with Ghost Of You… Gerard and Helena decide to go out, but their car gets a hit & run by another car and they both lie on the road… Gerard sees Helena dying… he realizes the inescapable truth of her death… and keeps a vivid image in his mind of the face of the driver that hit them…Continues with Famous Last Words Gerard knows he can’t do anything to save her, because he’s been badly hit also, but tells her that he isn’t afraid to live on… he tells her that he will seek revenge on the guy… he’s full of anger and despair and that’s what keeps him alive… Gerard survives the accident and lives… Then the story goes on with the song Helena, like the music video, its her funeral… Gerard says goodbye to her and tells her they’ll be together again…Then Welcome to the Black Parade, the setting would be her burial… Gerard will continue to live on and carry her memory with him… and that he doesn’t care what other people think because he couldn’t save her… and that he won’t give up…Then the story continues with It’s Not A Fashion Statement, It’s A Deathwish… Gerard decides to seek revenge on the guy who killed Helena… He find leads and finds himself in the guy’s house… Gerard takes out his gun and gets in… nothing can stop him now… the guy gets on his knees and pleads for his life… Gerard loads the gun… gets ready to shoot and… The story goes on with Hang ‘Em High, Helena’s ghost suddenly appears and… tells Gerard not to kill the guy… and that she wouldn’t be happy if Gerard would kill for her memory… and tells him not to live in the past… and that he should move on… The next song would be, Demolition Lovers… Gerard doesn’t kill the guy and lets him go… He tells Helena’s ghost he’s sorry and how much she means to him…The finale would be This is How I Disappear… Helena’s ghost is gone and Gerard lives on even if he’s all alone…
2007-03-23 16:28:35 · 5 answers · asked by kalerei_fury 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Feel free to tell me anything to improve it!
2007-03-23 16:30:01 · update #1
Sounds good, as a blurb. Write it properly, with dialogue and scene setting and so on and post it on an MCR fanfic forum. At least there you'll receive something that resembles an unbiased review of your writing style and the story's content. You just *know* that whenever you ask an MCR-related question on Y!A there'll be eejits who take the pish. You don't want that, do you? Some advice re writing in general: no matter what anyone says, don't let hurtful criticism get you down; just keep on writing. Don't let anyone tell you that what you write is garbage; simply keep improving your style! But I daresay that as an MCR fan you already knew not to take haters to heart, do you? Good luck!
2007-03-24 04:31:20 · answer #1 · answered by - 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The only thing I would like to see changed in this is if it was told in story-mode instead of you just describing the story. Once you get it in story-mode could you e-mail it to me? You can send it through my Y!Answers profile. Great story!
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2007-03-23 16:36:19 · answer #2 · answered by Chimpanzees? Monkey. 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i really liked it, the only thing is, how can he seek revenge if he was badly injured not too long ago?
2007-03-23 16:34:13 · answer #3 · answered by scarlet begonia 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
that was cool...But i can't even think of helena as his girlfriend....i mean,c'mon,she was his grandmom..!anyways,the story was ,kinda,funny though..!
2007-03-24 15:46:04 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
you must be REALLY bored
2007-03-23 16:31:52 · answer #5 · answered by indieassassin 6 · 0⤊ 2⤋