The day's just beginning
You see the girl you love
You don't know what to do or say
You're friends, you talk to eachother everyday
On the phone, computer, etc
You're walking with her
Talking, laughing, having the time of your life
The sun hits ya, you smile at her she smiles at you
It's time to say goodbye
You hug and walk off
You're walking, past places where we played as kids
Later you talk to eachother
Time's ending
You say you'll see eachother tomorrow
You know what
You're in goddamn love
Is there anything else better in the world
2007-03-23 13:40:46 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I like it pretty good. Try writing more it will help you express your emotions more. Over all cool, nice keep doing your thang.
2007-03-23 13:55:43 · answer #1 · answered by Ashanti W 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Um...yeah...it's full of emotion but not much more than a blog or journal entry in my opinion. Keep at it and something great will evolve.
2007-03-23 20:46:09 · answer #2 · answered by Pippa A 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋