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The emotion of love

If you consider for true love
It will appear to you
If you desire the emotion
Then intended for the devotion
You just know when you’ve found the right one
When they become your world
Your moon and your sun.

2007-03-23 12:47:13 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music Other - Entertainment

6 answers

Hello,
Its a good try.
The "for "in the first line is not grammatically right.
Anyway that is a good effort.
Persistance always pays.
chao

2007-03-23 12:56:00 · answer #1 · answered by Jacob M 1 · 0 0

Short and sweet. I give it an 8.

And you get one back....

Sometimes You Hurt The Ones You Love


I’m sorry, honey
Ain’t it funny how time passes by
Lately I find
I’ve been so blind and I don’t know why

Meant to write you more often than I had
Meant to give you more good times than the bad
Don’t know what I’ve been thinking of....
Sometimes you hurt the ones you love
Sometimes you hurt the ones you love

The road is long
The chain as strong as its weakest link
As I traveled
It all unraveled and I lost my strength

I get it back a little more every day
I need to know we really still are okay
Don’t know what I’ve been thinking of....
Sometimes you hurt the ones you love
Sometimes you hurt the ones you love

Toss the skeleton from the closet
Let’s get it right from the start
There – that wasn’t difficult, was it?
The finished jigsaw puzzle of my heart

Meant to write you more often than I had
Meant to give you more good times than the bad
Don’t know what I’ve been thinking of....
Sometimes you hurt the ones you love
Sometimes you hurt the ones you love

I’m sorry, honey
Ain’t it funny how time passes by

2007-03-23 19:53:21 · answer #2 · answered by Your Uncle Dodge! 7 · 0 0

i like it 1-10 10 being the highest i give it a 9.

2007-03-23 19:50:23 · answer #3 · answered by glamorous 2 · 0 0

hmmmmmm. out of five stars, I'd give it a three and a half

2007-03-23 19:53:48 · answer #4 · answered by Cadao 1 · 0 0

eh....doesn't really stand out for me

2007-03-23 19:54:19 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

pretty good

2007-03-23 20:11:37 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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