Sometimes I feel a wave of sadness
That washes over my slow beating heart
And I wonder, why am I sad?
I have a life of which I should be glad
But since that very moment
I heard that breath taking news
All I felt was a stabbing pain in my heart
And there it was, in two pieces ripped apart
I had never had so much love for someone
The love I have for you
And all I had wished for is that you would love me too
But I guess the two of us were just not meant to be
But you are the only one, to my heart you hold the key.
2007-03-23 12:27:46 · 19 answers · asked by [SuZaNnA]™ 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
It's quite nice, did you write it??
2007-03-23 12:29:47 · answer #1 · answered by Incognito 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't know what a peom is,but i guess poem.
You must hurt very much :writing this
These aren't random thoughts
So you recently broke up a relationship.
How sad
Give it a place and time.
And grieve
You end up being a stronger person than before.
My best wishes go out to you.
Sky.
2007-03-23 19:34:40 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty nice and touching. Good. 9/10.
2007-03-23 19:32:08 · answer #3 · answered by cats 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like it, but don't let him keep you down. If things are meant to be then you will get back together. All things heal with time.
Take care.
2007-03-23 19:31:56 · answer #4 · answered by speedracer54348066 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its a really moving poem so true and lovely if u wrote well keep up the good work
2007-03-23 19:30:47 · answer #5 · answered by dd 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sooo much love, very sad.
2007-03-23 19:31:13 · answer #6 · answered by kayboff 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well its pretty good but try to make it rhyme better (if you want it to rhyme, seeming that poems dont have to), but i think its really nice.
2007-03-23 19:31:59 · answer #7 · answered by Alyssa 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think ist okay, i think you could have flowed better, created more of a rythm with it and been more descriptive with your words but its okay
2007-03-23 19:31:35 · answer #8 · answered by TiMeT0daNc3E 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Honestly, I think it is very good.
2007-03-23 19:31:05 · answer #9 · answered by Jaded 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it.
2007-03-23 19:29:48 · answer #10 · answered by paul 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋