http://www.milanostudios.net/Audio/Eightminutesaway.WMA
Hi again, I like hearing critiques of my stuff, so I figured I'd put just one other song on here for today. I wrote and recorded this 2 years ago for a girl I had an "affair" with...(she had/has a fiancee).
I need to redo the vocals, obviously, but in additon to that, what else could change for the better? Thanks for your help.
2007-03-23 12:01:30 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
hi i say well done with bit of work and some rearranging lyric s it would do very well first with local radio s then who knows it song i can see being on the radio
i wish you the best of luck with Ur work u have talent
2007-03-23 12:15:46 · answer #1 · answered by dd 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry it took so long to answer (on dial up ) it took ages to download.IThe music was great.Maybe we'll hear it on the radio someday.
2007-03-23 20:12:38 · answer #2 · answered by snowluk 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ummm...it definitely needs work on the vocals, but it isn't bad otherwise, the lyircs are pretty desperate sounding.
2007-03-23 19:05:32 · answer #3 · answered by JesusLovesMe! 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's really catchy!!!!! Do you have any words for the song? I like the beginning of it.
2007-03-23 19:06:32 · answer #4 · answered by ♫♫ Brittany ♫♫™ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
um maybe you should get into the rhythm more and show more depression in your voice to show how sad you are to not have her by your side
2007-03-23 19:08:37 · answer #5 · answered by ashley r 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
great song, just ,as you said vocals suck
2007-03-23 19:17:51 · answer #6 · answered by Joshv 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋