could u check my poem? i cant post it here coz it too long!
http://www.friendster.com/group-discussion/index.php?t=msg&th=303056&start=0&
2007-03-23 08:01:15 · 15 answers · asked by TJ 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
im not emo... i just displayed my fave praise...hehe. just to clear things out.
2007-03-30 10:41:45 · update #1
You are a natural poet.
2007-03-24 16:29:24 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hi Jenz,
Your poem shows a lot of promise. You start out
as if you're confused, unsure of something. You
embrace the feelings of love and joy, but also the
feelings of anguish and dispair. Several places
in it, you sound like life couldn't be any better, then
you turn around and express the desire for death.
There are a few grammatical errors in your poem,
but I understood your question to ask how good it
was--not how grammatically correct it was, right?
It expresses plenty of emotion, but also shows a
little fear and confusion about your future.
--------------That' my take on it, OK?----------------------
2007-03-31 13:44:22 · answer #2 · answered by SlownEasy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love poetry...you should post some short poems if you have any here i would read them an appreciate them.
2007-03-29 22:06:35 · answer #3 · answered by avaughn09 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Really nice
2007-03-27 14:24:01 · answer #4 · answered by Ollie 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yer its cool, sounds like something else I know. V.g! â«could be a song â«
2007-03-29 12:28:56 · answer #5 · answered by Missy B 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
BORING!!! i hate poetry!!! well since songs are poetry, i hate poetry without music or a rhythm.
2007-03-30 20:31:42 · answer #6 · answered by val p 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
On that site is says I LOVE PAIN...is that you? Are you emo?
2007-03-29 10:31:19 · answer #7 · answered by missellie 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice
2007-03-30 23:09:13 · answer #8 · answered by Jamie T 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like it.
2007-03-30 17:04:10 · answer #9 · answered by Granny 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats good
2007-03-29 12:25:13 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋