Its about time i give up Cause nothings gonna change I dont need to be let down by somebody else Shouldnt wast all i have on sombody who doesnt want what i have to give Too many times i was left alone believeing In something that wasnt true Cant go through all the pain again From another thing i realise i cant have Just to end up crying with no one to help It'll be hard to try and move All the hope i had slipped away All i'm left with is hurt i can take With no way to rid myself of it Wont you to know how bad it feels to be me But i know deep down i dont wanna hurt you Should i prove to you the way i feel? I dont wanna show you the real me Cause its everything you wouldnt want it to be Still dont understand why i though i had a chance to get close to you You dont wanna make a mistake by getting close to me I'm so afraid of me feelings Cant believe i revealed my weakness Told you things i shouldnt have Youve made me so vunerableMy feelings keep telling me not to leave But should i go?
2007-03-23 02:42:33 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Social Science ➔ Psychology
I see it more as something that you are going through more then I view it as a poem.
we all go through that you know?
we all have been hurt, some worse then others.
I know I have been hurt in a most serious way when I was married.
but you know something?
It made me stronger.
It helped me to find the real me.
It helped me to understand my spiritual side even more.
and although the pain will always be there,
I choose to not let it win.
I choose to let it go.
I choose to have hope of having love again in my life.
I choose to live, not die.
and believe me, at one time I was very suicidal over some terrible things that he did to me and my children.
but I kept my hopes and my dreams of it all getting better, and it did.
over time, I think that we all have certain things that we have to go through in order to become stronger, and a better person.
but if we let those things bring us down,
we let them make us sad,
we let them keep hurting us.
then we are what we chose to be,
weak, and insecure.
I choose to be me, and not worry anymore like I used to,
and now...
well, I also write poetry, and that is what got me through it all.
I wrote alot about it, from the pain, the sadness, to the strengths that I found.
If it were not for writing what I was going through, I would not be here today.
and I would not be the same person that I am today.
so I see it like this... if it were not for the deception, the lies. the tears that were cried.
I would not be,
the spirit that is me,
I would not be the spirit that is free
I would of been
what he wanted in sin
and never would of I ever again felt love
from with in.
with out the sadness,
I would not appreciate it when I feel the gladness.
If it were not becoming aware
I'd still be someone who didn't understand
that the world is not fair.
but now,, I do care,
and I am aware
and I do have love.
and with me love is now there
2007-03-23 03:09:01 · answer #1 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My interpretation: Yes, you should go. There are many, many men out there who love women and treat them with respect and kindness. Before you get another man, though, find out why you let yourself get hurt so badly by someone who is obviously abusive. You deserve better, and you have to get to the bottom of why you were attracted to this creep in the first place so you don't wind up in the same situation again.
2007-03-23 03:07:50 · answer #2 · answered by No Shortage 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
As far as my interpretation goes I can completely relate to you. I have a crush on someone and wish that they do not close, but they always do. The way I interpreter the poem is that you are afraid of telling someone how you feel because you do not want to scare them off or/and expose yourself. Crushes are like a poison arrow, the more you leave them in the worse it gets.
2007-03-23 02:52:46 · answer #3 · answered by Husain F 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
properly, curiously like a valuable beginner poem to me. it seems which you're somewhat focussing on the rhymes yet no longer plenty on the element. that's extra ideal to have something to declare, then enable it exchange right into a poem.
2016-10-20 07:05:02 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like you got burned in a bad relationship. Many many times.
2007-03-23 02:50:15 · answer #5 · answered by Tine 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋