i have a 10 page term paper due tomorrow, friday. the term paper is on a single word emotion, mine's is HAPPINESS. i am done with 9 pages. but i am having trouble writing the conclusion. my primaries are: ROMEO AND JULIET, CINDERELLA, THEIR EYES WERE WATCHING GOD, AND MONA LISA. thanx for ur help in advance!
2007-03-22 18:24:20 · 8 answers · asked by ? KAT ? 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
You NEVER write an essay without FIRST having a conclusion already conceived.
The conclusion is your justification for writing the essay, and the payoff you give the reader for spending the time to wade through your other ten pages.
Get the heck out of your left brain and start imagining, or you will be a hack who only compiles facts.
(Oh, BTW, THAT was MY conclusion)
Your mileage may vary,
GET
2007-03-22 18:35:56 · answer #1 · answered by gordios_thomas_icxc 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
You could conclude with some personal experience of happiness you had and how it made you feel like a ten year old again, etc.
Conclusions are often the most difficult part of an essay to write, and many writers feel that they have nothing left to say after having written the paper. A writer needs to keep in mind that the conclusion is often what a reader remembers best. Your conclusion should be the best part of your paper.
A conclusion should stress the importance of the thesis statement, give the essay a sense of completeness, and
leave a final impression on the reader.
Oh, one more thing, not to take offense but there is no such word as," mine's".
Good Luck!
2007-03-22 18:32:17 · answer #2 · answered by Incognito 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Erm I would not choose this topic. This is a paper on sub culture and many people will disagree with you. A safer topic similarly would be a paper on the effects cliques have on people. It is safer and is a great topic for school.
2016-03-29 00:32:34 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You have got good answers so far, but I think that you have to rebuttal your introduction and your thesis statement, which is what you think about Happiness. Put some right brain stuff into it. Play devils advocate, if you must. But most of all, have fun with it. After all, if you don't enjoy it, your reader won't either.
Harry
2007-03-22 18:50:30 · answer #4 · answered by FamilyHistory 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
summarize your main points, e.g. how did each of your examples experience happiness. If there is common thread with all of your examples, state it here. Check your intro and what you stated you would explain in the paper, and include a sentance or two as to what your conclusions were.
2007-03-22 18:29:22 · answer #5 · answered by alstar333 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
u gotta have a conclusion supporting your introduction, especially its better if u cite the last sentence of ur introduction and support in either way as supporting you whole essay. got my idea
2007-03-22 18:27:49 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Find a common denominator of all your points and state that.
2007-03-22 19:05:47 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
sorry honey, there's no happy ending in romeo and juliet, cinderella story is not really happy, mona lisa's faking a smile, donno what to say to you kid
2007-03-22 18:33:14 · answer #8 · answered by Scpwnz 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋